Max255 Our hands are really tied in this. The "paragraph" issues that you brought up is actually strictly following the paragraph by the author. In order to fix it, we would have to request the translators to merge the sentences in order to allow the sentences to flow better. However, after speaking to Webnovel, we were advised to not do so as it would create an internal issue so we have no choice but to leave it as it is.
It's our responsibility to ensure the translation is done accurately. It's in our best interest to ensure the novel gains the popularity that we want it to gain, however, due to the limited influence of our translation group, we are not able to do so.