though it may seem self-serving, I have recieved many positive notes on my world-building and realistic characterization in my own novel. you can find it here:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/death-the-most-high-the-demon-king_17982109905817605

Synopsis:
The tale of a world fallen to darkness, a God desperate to save his beloved and most of all the people who have to live in the world ruled by the wicked Demon King.
You'll meet Edo and Eva, the close friends of the Most High, Triac, who have to struggle with the guilt of giving the world over to the Demon King.
There's Anak and Tzipora who struggle against the tyranny of the proud and stubborn King Gel-ad.
Stars like the energetic Raguel, the passionate Uriel, and the treacherous Armaros add to the chaotic atmosphere, and even minor gods get involved.
Over the course of history, one grand story reveals itself. Delve into the chronicling of the planet Vinetum and its fall, and rise, as Triac exerts his influence to shatter the curses of the Demon King.

    You can try Superstars of Tomorrow. In my opinion, it has good characters building and logical flow.

    Or if you like Eastern Fantasy, Forty Mileniums of cultivation has a well developed characters and gave the side characters more screen time to show their depth.
    (Fair warning: the story can be a bit touching and might incite tears)

    Edit: I forgot to mention, those two are translated stories

      Daoist048876 hm, ask this in novelupdates since it includes all translated novels.

      a question though, do you read shounen ai and yaoi? i have a lot of suggestions.

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