TaintedMetal hey bro, just my suggestion. I read the first chapter and this thought came to me. When you were describing the tavern, that would be a place that gives a rustic feeling and instead of a wooden building if you had mentioned something like old whit oak, or walnut or the wood type, it would have just sounded better and would have made a vivid image of the scene. Of course you can ignore that but you can also research the wood used for buildings of that time. It would just make it slightly more visual. Though I enjoyed what you gave in it.

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      I want to do review swap for my novel, SAVE THE VILLAINESS : SYSTEM IN PROGRESS.
      this has GL, but not for the MC. Because MC has no love interest.
      I hope you will give review after reading 5 chapters.

      I will also do the same. Reading at least 5 chapters of your novel.
      I don't want a half assed review. I want a contructive critism. I will help the best way I can so, lets review swap.

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