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Dark_Scholars

You've... been wai... wai... waiting for me? O_o Eeeee... sorry mate I don't engage in those kinds of relationships with strangers.

Yeah, sure. I can give you an honest review. Though, once you read it, I'd advise to delete it from your review lists. It's gonna be long as f*ck.

Ah! First things first. Your synopsis. Yeah I'm already starting. Do keep in mind that what I will say are just SUGGESTIONS. In the end, you are the captain of your own ship, you decide your travel itinerary.

That part, is useless in my opinion
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#WEBNOVEL SPIRITY CONTEST 2021
#SLICE OF LIFE GENRE

"Have you heard? There is a man who tries all day to plant lotus flowers in the Denali Mountain."
"He must be crazy, even an Ice and wood Dao Flowering Realm Expert would not dare."

"Mummy that man dancing in the water over there is not wearing clothes"
Mrs Richard decisively covers her daughter's eyes while hauling a large fireball at the shameless man.

"What is going on? Since all the answers are C, why did I fail?
Lyle watched his 20% script while resolving to report his lazy teacher to the Examination Board.

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1) The first thing readers will see is a god damn tag about you entering the Spirity contest. They don't care. Even if you want them to know, it's already shown under your rating. So don't make it repetitive. Same for the #Slice of life.. You already have tags under your synopsis. Even if you want to highlight it, do it through you synopsis, no, SHOW it.

2) The dialogs and all that are great and one of them even made me crack a smile. But to my opinion, they serve no purpose. The actual synopsis begins afterward. Before reading about the tired hero my mind was trying to make heads or tails of what was happening. If you do include dialogs in your synopsis, make sure to... anchor them with something. Those are just here for the taking, or to "kinda" introduce potential characters. Again, to my opinion, they serve no purpose whatsoever. Even if it did, it wasn't clear enough for me to catch it.

3) Anything else that didn't come to mind.

I'll start to work on your honest review after I'm done writing my chap of the day. Which will take a while as you might guess. And since I'm doing an honest review, I'll make it as detailed as I can. Though, I'm no editor, so don't expect too much.

@Dark_Scholars If you don't reply to this post, I'm not going to review your story mate. I'll take it as you being too sensitive to handle what I'll write.

Yoan_Roturier this 1/2 review is already really great!

Dark_Scholars If you still want your review go to this link: https://forum.webnovel.com/d/52805-honest-reviews-request-thread

Yoan_Roturier I am here Ah sensei don't abandon me yet. It was time difference. Don't worry, I can handle it

Yoan_Roturier To anchor it? I think I understand. My fear is that it would be too short if I go straight to the point.

Yoan_Roturier I'd be happy for an honest review. My novel's name is "Non-Player Character." I'll be sure to give your novel a detailed review as well.

Epyonnn
Come by the thread I opened, some people are already there offering honest reviews. Just check it out, might be worth your while.
Of course, I'll review yours since I offered you to do so, but do come by. Having more people on it and traffic will probably attract those who are interested in honest reviews.

Cheers mate.

Yoan_Roturier seems like you’re already packed up! I’ll come back once it reaches 0 :)

MimiTea
Try to ask around. Someone else might want to take up your request. Go to the honest reviews request thread I opened. I think one or two people will be interested in offering you help.