BookWhisperer

Hi, I visited your blog and really love the idea, bookmarked it for future posts.
If it's not much of a bother, it would be great if you can review my novel and post about it. Thank you.

Name: The Midnight Crime
Genre: Fantasy
Synopsis: When he broke into the mansion that moonlit night, Falcon should have known he had taken a little too much of a risk, even for himself. When his life takes a tumble, he sets out to correct it again, unknowingly entangling in the enigma of a forgotten artifact along with the artist and the wild girl.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-midnight-crime_20640198305268305

It's okay if it doesn't suit your taste. And if it does, I would love an honest review of it.

    BookWhisperer

    One piece of advice, when asking for recommendations, especially in a place like this, you should detail your interests and preferences in a story. Otherwise, you will get recommended a lot of random garbage that will not fit your interests.

    And since we're talking about random garbage, I will recommend my story!

    If you're looking for things to read, you can technically read my story too. Since it is, in fact, written.


    In Z Finite

    Synopsis: A story about a young guy, who goes on an adventure in search of some magic stones and finds himself adrift in the dangerous events of the world around him.

    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/in-z-finite_20896434106083105

    Genre: Action, Adventure, Comedy, Fantasy

    If you had at least a chuckle reading this reply then you will probably enjoy the story.

      Vam_V Your blurb needs more work. This is short which is good but is a bit too general . No eye catching and wont bait readers.

      The story has nice flow but is too much text dumping , making it hard to read.

        Magsman
        Wow, someone actually read it, I am very surprised. Thank you very much for your input.

        Just two things:

        • 1 - By blurb you mean the synopsis? If the answer is yes, then yeah, it is pretty bad. But I don't really know what to put in there...

        • 2 - Could you tell me more about the text dumping thing? I am not familiar with this expression so I don't really get what you meant by it, and I want to understand it so I can improve my work.

        Also, sorry for deviating a little from the forum topic here.

          Jia_K Omg love the synopsis. I will read and review it, but it might take a couple days seeing as my school starts on thursday and I will be very busy. I love that you liked my blog. Thanks!

            Vam_V I'll read your story too! And in the future I will put what I am looking for in a book. I'm just starting on this app and still getting the hang of it. Thanks for all of the helpful comments.

            BookWhisperer

            Thanks for seeing the post and finding time for the review. Please do it at your own pace. Your blog's great!

            https://www.webnovel.com/book/in-a-world-with-magic-rielen%E2%80%99s-story_15841779406220805

            Name: In a World With Magic: Rielen's Story
            Genre: Fantasy/Romance
            Synopsis: Rielen is chosen as a magic user in the Kingdom of Autra. This means being taken from the one she loves and her family to the Royal Capital. What will become of Rielen and what does it mean to be selected? Join Rielen on her journey as a new mage in the Kingdom of Autra.

            This is the story I have chosen daily updates for. Please give me an honest review if this fits within the genres you read! : )

            Please review mine as well

            https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/17707119706580305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313215511
            Name: The Elusive Book Keeper
            Genre: Urban Fantasy
            Synopsis; The creature chuckled, his voice echoing within the empty walls.

            "What do you wish for? Youth, Immortality, Wealth, Power? You can be the one above all, I can make you Heaven's favoured child."
            His voice was bewitching, tempting one to the depths of hell..........

            Zane looked up, his eyes spoke of deep and suffocating emotions, "I will rather the heavens forget me instead."

            https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/17707119706580305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313215511

            BookWhisperer I’d like to offer up my work for your perusal and critique. I looked up your blog, and I think I’ll have to check out A Court of Thorns and Roses, at your suggestion.

            Since you like Romance Fantasy books, I think you’ll find my series quite interesting. It has Devoted Love, Magic, Battles, Fae of All Kinds, Comedy, Intrigue, and a cheeky Dragon in later chapters that is a favorite amongst my readers. The first 79 chapters are free to read if you’re interested, and thank you regardless.
            ☮️❤️😁

            https://m.webnovel.com/book/17626083906011405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313201538

            BookWhisperer
            Thanks, I will take look at the review.

            Is there a problem if I comment asking for some details about your opinion of the story in your blog review?

              BookWhisperer if you have the time, please review my novel below. Currently, it has a contract and regularly updated.

              Title: Herbs & Lotions – The Busy Life of Alfraed Logick

              Genre: Fantasy

              Synopsis:
              In a world where magic lives and mysterious civilization found, Alfraed Logick opens “Herbs & Lotions”, a shop selling various medicine, potion, and lotion.

              Under guidance of a mysterious master, the young man becomes an adept healer who possesses abnormal strength and stamina, fluency in ancient language, and willingness to go the extra mile. With these abilities he promises to make the shop the best in the world, and live the lifestyle of his dream.

              In his endeavor to promote his products to the world and earn extra income, he will unexpectedly have encounters with heroes, kings, elder dragons, demon lords, demigods, and many more, some become trusted friends, some bitter enemies, and one of them is the love of his life.

              This is the story of Alfraed Logick's busy life.

              Release rate: at least two chapter per week

              Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/herbs-lotions---the-busy-life-of-alfraed-logick_18990230506003205

                PWS Yeah of course i'll review it. Like i said to others, i'm starting school soon and will prob need like a week or so to get to it because others have asked me to first.

                  Title:‌ ‌Falling‌ ‌Stardust‌ ‌
                  Vol‌ ‌title:‌ ‌Estia's‌ ‌revenge‌ ‌
                  Link:‌ ‌‌https://www.webnovel.com/book/falling-stardust-estia's-embrace_20953821806532805‌
                  Genre:‌ ‌Action|‌ ‌adventure|fantasy|romance|‌ ‌
                  Synopsis:‌ ‌Having‌ ‌broken‌ ‌through‌ ‌to‌ ‌a‌ ‌much‌ ‌wider‌ ‌world,‌ ‌achieving‌ ‌his‌ ‌dream‌ ‌seems‌ ‌even‌ ‌more‌ ‌
                  impossible.‌ ‌Xasha‌ ‌fearlessly‌ ‌charges‌ ‌into‌ ‌a‌ ‌continent‌ ‌full‌ ‌of‌ ‌powerful‌ ‌and‌ ‌ruthless‌ ‌races‌ ‌to‌ ‌carve‌ ‌out‌ ‌
                  a‌ ‌place‌ ‌for‌ ‌the‌ ‌human‌ ‌race‌ ‌to‌ ‌thrive‌ ‌after‌ ‌millions‌ ‌of‌ ‌years‌ ‌of‌ ‌suffering‌ ‌in‌ ‌the‌ ‌abandoned‌ ‌region.‌ ‌
                  Author's‌ ‌comments.‌ ‌"At‌ ‌the‌ ‌root‌ ‌of‌ ‌it,‌ ‌Falling‌ ‌Stardust‌ ‌is‌ ‌about‌ ‌overcoming‌ ‌hardships,‌ ‌learning‌ ‌from‌ ‌
                  mistakes,‌ ‌having‌ ‌trust‌ ‌in‌ ‌those‌ ‌around‌ ‌you,‌ ‌and‌ ‌finding‌ ‌one's‌ ‌place‌ ‌in‌ ‌this‌ ‌world.‌ ‌It‌ ‌is‌ ‌a‌ ‌
                  coming-of-age‌ ‌story‌ ‌but‌ ‌also‌ ‌a‌ ‌one-man‌ ‌against‌ ‌the‌ ‌world‌ ‌story‌ ‌that‌ ‌will‌ ‌have‌ ‌you‌ ‌on‌ ‌the‌ ‌edge‌ ‌of‌ ‌
                  your‌ ‌seats.‌ ‌Don't‌ ‌believe‌ ‌me?‌ ‌Try‌ ‌it‌ ‌and‌ ‌see."‌ ‌

                    Vam_V Yeah by blurb I mean synopsis. Google Seat h blurb in you fond grenar articles om how to write one. i think there was a guide Eon blurb writing somewhere in this forum.

                    By text dumping , I mean you got way too much text and there isnt that much space. Also you probably could make the text shorter .

                      Magsman
                      Yeah, the synopsis was pretty bad, I remade it now.

                      Also, on the text dumping front, it was a problem with webnovel basically, the site ignores the spacing and just presses the text together, making that mush of text that you saw.

                      I fixed it by putting a " . " in literally every spacing so now the site can't just ignore it.

                        I'll bite.

                        https://www.webnovel.com/book/transition-and-restart_12652502605368205

                        Title: Transition and Restart

                        Genre: High School Romance (New Adult rather than Young Adult despite the setting)

                        Blurb:
                        If you were transported from this world to another almost identical.
                        If you were transported from your life to your teenage self.
                        If you had to restart your life again.
                        Would you, or would you cling to your memories?

                          I visited your blog and it's really interesting and good. It will help a lot of newcomers

                          I will be really happy if you review and read my work. It may not be in your taste but I am waiting for your honest review.

                          Webnovel

                          The Day I Saw A God
                          Novel - Fantasy Romance

                          https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-day-i-saw-a-god_17907694705493305

                          Synopsis
                          Humans are born in this world for a reason. They live searching for the reason why they are still alive. One may live for protect his love ones. Some lives to become a king or queen. Some are born poor trying to live their life however they can to survive clinging on the hope that there life will change. Some are born for disturbing the peace of the world. Some live to find peace that they have lost. Some may find there reason to live in there lifetime and some may can't find it even if they searched it in there entire lifetime but everyone have a promised day. A day that was promised by the god. This day wasn't only promised to humans but for every living being in the entire world. Humans, animals, fishes and birds they all are aware of it. The day when there life come to an end .That day was known to all living being by the mother nature .That is Death .Every living being will die one day. That is the promised day.

                          This story is about a girl. Her name is Natsumi Furakawa. She is in a High School Girl. She lived in Tokyo Japan. She had A Normal Life. Though she was the Japan's most Richest Architecture's daughter. Suddenly One Day She Meet With Someone Who Told Her That She Is Going Die Today.
                          What Will Happen To The Girl?
                          What Will she do?
                          Read the story to know about what happened to her and all the other people that she will meet and she had meet will have there promised day. The day they die.

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                              Hi, I'm not sure what type of novels you're looking for, but if this fits your interests, please do check it out!
                              [all forms of constructive criticism accepted ]

                              Title: An Undying Love Story
                              Genre: Thriller Romance [but in the 70s]
                              Status: Ongoing [new chapters out every day] <i try>

                              Synopsis: Lena, now in an old age home, recollects her short yet lovely romance in her teenage years, through a diary she wishes to publish. Albeit her love life flourishing, it brings along with it, some problems that negatively affect her dear ones, and at some point, her too. Laugh and cry with her, as she walks down memory lane, nostalgia accompanying her in the last moments of her life.

                              https://www.webnovel.com/book/an-undying-love-story_20917543105020205

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