Idyllic_Scribe

Awesome thank you! I appreciate the review. You mentioned grammatical errors. Were there a lot of them? I had paid an editor to professionally edit the book, but then I went back to each chapter and made bunch of changes, (I am definitly not an editor, lol) adding more depth. I haven't been able to afford another edit, but it sounds like I am going to need t figure that out. Thank you for letting me know.

      NinaChroni No, no!! Don't worry, there weren't many. I am a grammar phenatic, which I prob why I was able to spot them. But stuff like commas at the end of dialogue, those things. But you did very good! Not many grammar mistakes!!

          I am still looking for authors who write stories in cultivation, isekai, wuxia/xianxia, system, action, fantasy, adventure, BL and magic genres to swap reviews with me. I will make sure to read your books and add them to my library if I like them. I also post chapter comments and may even suggest corrections in certain paragraphs to certain chapters.

          I post kind and sincere reviews. If I find any need to correct punctuation or slight errors, I will only do it in paragraph comments.

          Let me know by replying to this comment post.

          Thank you!

            GMSJakers

            Yes. Thank you! I will get to it very shortly. I am trying to get my next book ready to put up. I don't mind doing my review first, but please do mine after. I don't think everyone is doing that, but it may just be taking some time. Lol. My book is kind of dark, but is definitely a story of strength and redemption. I hope you like it. I will let you know as soon as I am finished with the reviews. I usually leave chapter comments, as well.

                Idyllic_Scribe I have posted comments on certain paragraphs on certain chapters. I don't really see them as negative. Perhaps, others might that you may be compelled to edit them. But what I notice is that you shortened the very long paragraphs when I first read it. Also, there are parts in paragraphs that you may have to separate/splice, hehehe. It's up to you though.

                And regarding characters, Bai Yihan is interesting. I haven't really quite figured out his personality.

                    eudine hey yes absolutely I would love to. Realistically I won't be able to get to it till tomorrow because I spent the day getting in my own way LOL as far as my books go I'm about to in a little bit post my second book so you actually have some options. You can either review the sci-fi fantasy which I've been told is the dark book or a hybrid demon killer which is a little lighter of a read just let me know which one and I'll give you the link. I look forward to reading your book!

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