September 2021- Review Swap here!

Blissful_ChaotiC I stand by my review over there, three things here that I wanted to bring to your attention.
-I was slightly confused with ((((....sth sth....)))) until I figured out that it was the Reaper talking. Still not sure whether it's out loud or inwardly. Had to skip so much because of your exceptional way of describing images with words, it was way too bloody for me. (ML readers will love it). Long story short, you might want to use the Creators' thought's part to explain it to readers.
-It's personal preference, but so many other authors use two stars to express noise. * BOOM! * for me looks much more attractive than BOOM. But it's up to you of course.
-Once again, it's personal, but I didn't like the way each chapter ended with the word End. Shouldn't that come in the very end? You want your readers to keep scrolling down for more and the word End seems to be asking for the exact opposite.
Hope it gets contracted, hope you update 2 chapters a day because WN readers have that kind of expectation. And all the best in the world to you! Loved the cover btw!

Violet_Eve

MerrySweet Let's review swap.

GMSJakers

Blissful_ChaotiC

MerrySweet

Thank you so much!! Yes, you have a good point regarding using the creators' thought's to explain some stylistic choices that may be confusing.

Regarding 'End', you made another good point there. I suppose I had a bad habit of thinking of each chapter as it's own thing so I kept putting End as I was finishing it haha. I can remove those 🙂

Thanks again! I'm working on your, and everyone elses, review now!

McWms99

MerrySweet Ah this book right here. Firstly I hate all the characters but I love the novel. I hate all the characters because they are sooo human and well written. The aspects I've seen within my own life bring so much potency to each character. I can appreciate the novel for what it is. Female lead shitting on a guy that did her wrong, but I like that Cynthia's actions don't paint her as a hero. I saw someone say they would want 1st person perspective but I think you made an excellent choice with 3rd because you really get to simply see the actions and allow your own moral compass to lead you into what your seeing. I do wonder if this story needs all those chapters as in my personal preference that makes it a little intimidating to read (not really a fan of webnovel length prefer traditional novel length). There are a few typos here and there that could be cleaned up with a simple grammarly scrub to polish it off but other than that I can't complain about the actual novel. Great story I really love it glad I could read it.

Here's my novel https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-brother's-strength_24947605205370305

Blissful_ChaotiC

GMSJakers

For sure! I'll do my best to get to it tonight, but if I don't it'll be done by end of day tomorrow.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/where-the-world-ends_24022968405310005

Blissful_ChaotiC

Left a review! Here's a link to mine:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/where-the-world-ends_24022968405310005

Blissful_ChaotiC

Hydra_Gairum

Done!

angel_ododo

MerrySweet Sure. My story is "healing an illness" by angel_ododo

angel_ododo

SaberKey Sure. I am up for it. My story is "Healing An Illness by angel_ododo

Blissful_ChaotiC

Escape_Sequence

Left a review! Here's the link to mine:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/where-the-world-ends_24022968405310005

McWms99

Grandmasters yea sure here's my book https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-brother's-strength_24947605205370305

McWms99

Grandmasters I have to ask do you want me to leave an honest review? Or just a positive one? Because if I leave an honest one it'll be filled with criticism. I only ask because most of your reviews are very positive, and I don't want to leave you with something you don't really want to see or like.