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DeJeL This link doesn’t work for me. It says 404 Not Found. Am I the only one?

DeJeL 23DN4L That one was shut down: Updated Forum Link.;,;.

Link to the novel
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11041779705245505
The genre of the novel
Magical Realism and Science Fiction....
What do you think about it as an author
Nothing to say..coz everybody is author.
How common are the updates
2 chapter every week

Poche Hi nazell, I hope you don't mind me stating my opinions about your book :smiley:. BTW... I like the book cover :thumbup:

SYNOPSIS

ISSUES

• Doesn't give much impact.
• "Can Drusus Zephyro satisfy his obsession? Can the four species live in harmony?" This was supposed to be a good ending for your synopsis, it's an honest opinion of mine. But it lost it's baiting effect :cry: . I know it's probably hard to write a synopsis (every writer's problem), but always remember, just like buying a book in the bookstore, some/most readers would read the synopsis to check whether it is worth wasting your time and money. That's why, you have to pour all your effort to make sure your synopsis sounds interesting. Create the best baiting effect for your book.
• Rewrite your synopsis and make it interesting.

CHAPTER ONE

ISSUES:

• Sentence Construction
• The use of commas.
• Misuse of Tenses
• Lifeless and a bit awkward character dialogues
• Lacks descriptive sentences
• Not really interesting

DO YOU LIKE THE NOVEL?
- Can't properly judge since it's still in Chapter One.

IS IT WORTH A READ? WILL YOU PUT IT IN YOUR LIBRARY?
- I don't want to hurt your feelings, but as a reviewer I want to honestly state my opinion. It sounds interesting, but it only sounds interesting because I could see potential within it. But if you ask me if I will put in my library... I will still wait till the author fixes the issues within his or her book.

SUGGESTIONS

• You need to work on the placement of your commas.
  You can use this link as a guide: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/owlprint/607/
• Improve your narration and balance everything out.
  If you want to improve your narrative story, you can use this link as a guide: http://www.writersdigest.com/whats-new/25-ways-to-improve-your-writing-in-30-minutes-a-day

Poche Hi nazell, I hope you don't mind me stating my opinions about your book :smiley:. BTW... I like the book cover :thumbup:

SYNOPSIS

ISSUES

• Doesn't give much impact.
• "Can Drusus Zephyro satisfy his obsession? Can the four species live in harmony?" This was supposed to be a good ending for your synopsis, it's an honest opinion of mine. But it lost it's baiting effect :cry: . I know it's probably hard to write a synopsis (every writer's problem), but always remember, just like buying a book in the bookstore, some/most readers would read the synopsis to check whether it is worth wasting your time and money. That's why, you have to pour all your effort to make sure your synopsis sounds interesting. Create the best baiting effect for your book.
• Rewrite your synopsis and make it interesting.

CHAPTER ONE

ISSUES:

• Sentence Construction
• The use of commas.
• Misuse of Tenses
• Lifeless and a bit awkward character dialogues
• Lacks descriptive sentences
• Not really interesting

DO YOU LIKE THE NOVEL?
- Can't properly judge since it's still in Chapter One.

IS IT WORTH A READ? WILL YOU PUT IT IN YOUR LIBRARY?
- I don't want to hurt your feelings, but as a reviewer I want to honestly state my opinion. It sounds interesting, but it only sounds interesting because I could see potential within it. But if you ask me if I will put in my library... I will still wait till the author fixes the issues within his or her book.

SUGGESTIONS

• You need to work on the placement of your commas.
  You can use this link as a guide: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/owlprint/607/
• Improve your narration and balance everything out.
  If you want to improve your narrative story, you can use this link as a guide: http://www.writersdigest.com/whats-new/25-ways-to-improve-your-writing-in-30-minutes-a-day

P.S. I hope you aren't disheartened, offended, or angry about this review.
- YNNIE234

yuhyeenie well, I am not surprised cuz I translate this using google. If you read the author's thought I explained there.

Poche Oh! okay... I understand now.. you can always ask for an editor to help you, just simply fill in this form in order for you to get a chance to have your own personal editor or reviewer :) https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScOPkZ4PYz6N6SsZxwgsH0c00I61gVa6MRfkwpyN7SeMJWj9Q/viewform?usp=pp_url

yuhyeenie Can you review mine?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/10332848305006905/Nefarious-%22EVIL%22-Affairs

KingBiBiK Hi there kibibik!

SYNOPSIS

ISSUES
- Sounds more like a prologue than a synopsis. You need to revise it later on.

CHAPTERS

ISSUES
- Misspelled words
- There are some grammar errors.
- Punctuation in some sentences
etc.

Use this form: https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScOPkZ4PYz6N6SsZxwgsH0c00I61gVa6MRfkwpyN7SeMJWj9Q/viewform?usp=pp_url to get a much more defined review for your book. It would be better if you had a discord, for a much more faster reply.

I would appreciate a review!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11067021205253605
Fantasy
This is a story I have been brewing for a while now but would always put off starting.
I plan on doing a few chapters a week 2-3 unless I get some more time off form my job then bonus chapters!
I am new to writing so any help or comments are appreciated.

Hi! I would like to request for a review.
This is the link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11076106506249505/A-Certain-Man's-Idyllic-Morning
It is a oneshot story with only a thousand words.

yuhyeenie Thanks for the review.
Thanks for your input about the synopsis.
I am fixing the grammar errors soon.

Can you also answer the questions like before

DO YOU LIKE THE NOVEL?
IS IT WORTH A READ? WILL YOU PUT IT IN YOUR LIBRARY?

KingBiBiK sure2x so for the do I like or is it worth a read.. I could say it was good book, just fix the errors that you made and youll be fine

Link to the novel:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11093198806254305/The-Lineage-Saga

Genre: Fantasy

What do you think about it as an author:
I think the story is well-developed, although it is slow-paced this allows the story to have a better world-building and character development. There is a nice mystery around the MC and the Lineage is a pretty original power concept.

How common are the updates:
A chapter every two days.

I know that it's not the clearest but i would like to know where i could improve in my writing skills. Leaving a review would be nice so I see where I went wrong or right in my writing style. Anyone who reads this has the opportunity to do so. (I am very nervous that I'm not doing that good of a job on getting my thoughts across on what's happening in the story.)

https://www.webnovel.com/book/11615926306442705/Altora

Requesting a review on my novel.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11680969006470105/My-Life
Genre: Competitive Sports, Little Fantasy
Please give the review brutally nice way. Thank you in advance.