Link to the novel
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11041779705245505
The genre of the novel
Magical Realism and Science Fiction....
What do you think about it as an author
Nothing to say..coz everybody is author.
How common are the updates
2 chapter every week
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Poche Hi nazell, I hope you don't mind me stating my opinions about your book :smiley:. BTW... I like the book cover :thumbup:
SYNOPSIS
ISSUES
- Doesn't give much impact.
- "Can Drusus Zephyro satisfy his obsession? Can the four species live in harmony?" This was supposed to be a good ending for your synopsis, it's an honest opinion of mine. But it lost it's baiting effect :cry: . I know it's probably hard to write a synopsis (every writer's problem), but always remember, just like buying a book in the bookstore, some/most readers would read the synopsis to check whether it is worth wasting your time and money. That's why, you have to pour all your effort to make sure your synopsis sounds interesting. Create the best baiting effect for your book.
- Rewrite your synopsis and make it interesting.
CHAPTER ONE
ISSUES:
- Sentence Construction
- The use of commas.
- Misuse of Tenses
- Lifeless and a bit awkward character dialogues
- Lacks descriptive sentences
- Not really interesting
DO YOU LIKE THE NOVEL?
- Can't properly judge since it's still in Chapter One.
IS IT WORTH A READ? WILL YOU PUT IT IN YOUR LIBRARY?
- I don't want to hurt your feelings, but as a reviewer I want to honestly state my opinion. It sounds interesting, but it only sounds interesting because I could see potential within it. But if you ask me if I will put in my library... I will still wait till the author fixes the issues within his or her book.
SUGGESTIONS
- You need to work on the placement of your commas.
You can use this link as a guide: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/owlprint/607/ - Improve your narration and balance everything out.
If you want to improve your narrative story, you can use this link as a guide: http://www.writersdigest.com/whats-new/25-ways-to-improve-your-writing-in-30-minutes-a-day
Poche Hi nazell, I hope you don't mind me stating my opinions about your book :smiley:. BTW... I like the book cover :thumbup:
SYNOPSIS
ISSUES
- Doesn't give much impact.
- "Can Drusus Zephyro satisfy his obsession? Can the four species live in harmony?" This was supposed to be a good ending for your synopsis, it's an honest opinion of mine. But it lost it's baiting effect :cry: . I know it's probably hard to write a synopsis (every writer's problem), but always remember, just like buying a book in the bookstore, some/most readers would read the synopsis to check whether it is worth wasting your time and money. That's why, you have to pour all your effort to make sure your synopsis sounds interesting. Create the best baiting effect for your book.
- Rewrite your synopsis and make it interesting.
CHAPTER ONE
ISSUES:
- Sentence Construction
- The use of commas.
- Misuse of Tenses
- Lifeless and a bit awkward character dialogues
- Lacks descriptive sentences
- Not really interesting
DO YOU LIKE THE NOVEL?
- Can't properly judge since it's still in Chapter One.
IS IT WORTH A READ? WILL YOU PUT IT IN YOUR LIBRARY?
- I don't want to hurt your feelings, but as a reviewer I want to honestly state my opinion. It sounds interesting, but it only sounds interesting because I could see potential within it. But if you ask me if I will put in my library... I will still wait till the author fixes the issues within his or her book.
SUGGESTIONS
- You need to work on the placement of your commas.
You can use this link as a guide: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/owlprint/607/ - Improve your narration and balance everything out.
If you want to improve your narrative story, you can use this link as a guide: http://www.writersdigest.com/whats-new/25-ways-to-improve-your-writing-in-30-minutes-a-day
P.S. I hope you aren't disheartened, offended, or angry about this review.
- YNNIE234
Poche Oh! okay... I understand now.. you can always ask for an editor to help you, just simply fill in this form in order for you to get a chance to have your own personal editor or reviewer :) https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScOPkZ4PYz6N6SsZxwgsH0c00I61gVa6MRfkwpyN7SeMJWj9Q/viewform?usp=pp_url
KingBiBiK Hi there kibibik!
SYNOPSIS
ISSUES
- Sounds more like a prologue than a synopsis. You need to revise it later on.
CHAPTERS
ISSUES
- Misspelled words
- There are some grammar errors.
- Punctuation in some sentences
etc.
Use this form: https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScOPkZ4PYz6N6SsZxwgsH0c00I61gVa6MRfkwpyN7SeMJWj9Q/viewform?usp=pp_url to get a much more defined review for your book. It would be better if you had a discord, for a much more faster reply.
KingBiBiK Hi there kibibik!
SYNOPSIS
ISSUES
- Sounds more like a prologue than a synopsis. You need to revise it later on.
CHAPTERS
ISSUES
- Misspelled words
- There are some grammar errors.
- Punctuation in some sentences
etc.
Use this form: https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScOPkZ4PYz6N6SsZxwgsH0c00I61gVa6MRfkwpyN7SeMJWj9Q/viewform?usp=pp_url to get a much more defined review for your book. It would be better if you had a discord, for a much more faster reply.
I would appreciate a review!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11067021205253605
Fantasy
This is a story I have been brewing for a while now but would always put off starting.
I plan on doing a few chapters a week 2-3 unless I get some more time off form my job then bonus chapters!
I am new to writing so any help or comments are appreciated.
Hi! I would like to request for a review.
This is the link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11076106506249505/A-Certain-Man's-Idyllic-Morning
It is a oneshot story with only a thousand words.
- Edited
Request for Review, please :)
Link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/11046506305247005
Genre : Fantasy
What do you think about it as an author
I think everything will get complicated in the future lol, especially when I have someone transmigrated into a kitten, trying to live his life in his new world. How would he fare in this world? Not sure, since I'm still thinking and trying to write it out properly.
I do have a few more chapters on Google Docs, but I'll be editing them.... soon lol
How common are the updates
* Maybe one chapter per day, or one chapter per week.
Thank you for your time~! Happy reading~!
10 days later
- Edited
Request for Review on mine if you have some time to spare.
Link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/11075053406249205/Edea-Chronicle%3A-Hero-Summoning-Conspiracy
Genre: Fantasy, Reincarnation
What I think of it as an author: started out as me writing it on a stack of notebooks when my computer broke down a while back. I've gotten my lazy butt off after Qi released inkstone and started rewriting it but still using my past ideas as a main source of how the story goes.
How Common are the updates: just posted it a week ago and released 12 chapters as of this post. The regular schedule is M W F with bonus chapters released depending on the amount of feedback i get.
Link to the novel:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11093198806254305/The-Lineage-Saga
Genre: Fantasy
What do you think about it as an author:
I think the story is well-developed, although it is slow-paced this allows the story to have a better world-building and character development. There is a nice mystery around the MC and the Lineage is a pretty original power concept.
How common are the updates:
A chapter every two days.
2 months later
I know that it's not the clearest but i would like to know where i could improve in my writing skills. Leaving a review would be nice so I see where I went wrong or right in my writing style. Anyone who reads this has the opportunity to do so. (I am very nervous that I'm not doing that good of a job on getting my thoughts across on what's happening in the story.)
Requesting a review on my novel.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11680969006470105/My-Life
Genre: Competitive Sports, Little Fantasy
Please give the review brutally nice way. Thank you in advance.
- Edited
Endless Mountains
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11664564305472105/Endless-Mountains
I honestly do not think it is perfect however I try to fix mistakes and I am looking for someone to honestly review my novel
Also can you please read to the latest chapter as I believe my writing quality gets better every chapter
I am in year 11 a crucial year for me but i do 2 chapters sometimes i might do 1 chapter a day and in my first two days i was able to do 3 chapters
I've only started this book this week so I'm not sure what exactly are the bad parts so that's why i need a reviewer who will criticise me
(Dont be too harsh)
Review please if you have spare time.
A Chromatic World is a fantasy story that starts from Earth year 1969 leading up to the Multiverse. The Earth was written with the same history timeline with an altered flair, with the addition of Magic, different Races, and etc. Filled with romance, actions, and adventure.
Join Arthur and his group. Educated to be the Messiah of Earth, their journey's will be filled with thorns, twists, and turns. One tragedy after another. Will they yield to their fate? Or break away their shackles of destiny?
DKQ You all on the FB ( Webnovel Writers) it gets pretty quiet over there I think the admin is planning a feedback thing! Maybe you can help?