PEARL_WANG
Hey, it got real potential. I like it honestly, but at some part of chapters, it got drag on a little to much. Perhaps you could focus in the main plot before giving it complication too early?

      Huiyin_ing
      No problem in the grammar, and it's fun to read. Although the main MCs are too bratty and arrogant for my taste haha. I can't read more than 3 chapter because I can't seem to like the main MCs.

          Elementary519
          It's nice to read, but the clunky paragraph made it hard to read. If you revised it, please tell me in this forum and I'll read it again. Hopefully, this time I can pass through the first chapter.

              HairySquid
              It's really good, I like the MC and how natural her reaction when got transmigrsted. I made suggestion in your comment, but really, a month and just 2 chapters? Hahaha, please update more frequently.

                  HairySquid
                  Oooh, sorry, I mistook you for someone else (ﾉ≧ βˆ€ ≦)οΎ‰. Please keep up the good work! Write till the first plot end and then revised it, you'll progress better that way.

                    JA_Chrysant sorry for the late reply and it seems you already left a review but if theres anything you thought I needed to work on, I would love to know now. Honest opinion!

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