Title: Ascension of Elden
Genre: Urban Fantasy
Tags: # ACTION # ADVENTURE # MAGIC # APOCALYPSE # EVOLUTION # URBAN # RAREBLOODLINE # BLOODPUMPING # NO-HAREM

Synopsis: From the depths of the Earth, a Great Chasm erupted, bridging continents once separated. This cataclysmic event unleashed mysterious Essence energies, bestowing otherworldly powers upon those who could master them. However, those who mishandled Essence faced the risk of transforming into corrupted monsters.

Five centuries have passed since the Great Chasm's emergence. The world has adapted to utilizing—and warring over—the powers of Essence. Monstrous beasts rise from the chasm's depths, endangering civilization, yet humanity tenaciously clings to hope.

Elden leads a humble, solitary life. None know he harbors a dark secret—a corrupted spirit that is stirred whenever he channels the raw Essence of the chasm within him. Yet above all, Elden wishes for nothing more than peace.

However, destiny has other plans for him. Will he embrace his dark side to protect himself? As he grapples with controlling his corruption, he ponders—does he even hold a soul worth saving?

Elden's journey to find his own redemption will reveal the hidden history of the Great Chasm and its mysterious connection to the fate of humanity. His quest to contain the chaos within himself may hold the key to containing the much greater chaos threatening to consume the world.

Link: Ascension of Elden

    HeatherReader
    Umm, I don't have much to say, because I rarely read an adult novel. But the sex scene is really good, it's easy to imagine. But the problem lies with the flow of the story. It's confusing, I was lost frequently and needed to recheck the paragraph before to show where I was. Well, good work, Author!

        mahe_ale_aba
        Thank you, it was enjoyable. I really like the dynamic between princess and the characters around her, especially Orion. But the grammar errors and writing technique make it hard to read (especially chapter 1). It's okay, it takes time to truly integrate your mother language and english. With practice, it would be much better I'm sure.

          Heartwill_Abledu_k
          Thank you, I could only finish two chapters on your story. The world-building is intriguing, I like it. However, it feels like reading a report rather than a story. The information clumped together in one paragraph, and then the next one there is new lore again. It makes me confused about the flow of story. Perhaps you could focus on story first, then world-building next?

              JA_Chrysant
              Ohh... I'm sorry for the little error.
              Title: A night Copulation with the billionaire.

                  B_DRAG
                  I finished reading 5 chapters. I'd like to continue a bit before telling the full review hehe.

                      DARK_DEKU
                      Hmmm, I don't know. It feels robotic to be honest. The flow of the story is flat (it's only consisted of character conversation devoid any real meaning/problem), without background and world-building. The first 5 character should include the premise (what's the main problem, what's MC attitude toward it, why MC must pursue it), some world-building (at least the school, the house, or the town, or the power) and antagonist. There's none there.

                          mahe_ale_aba
                          I already did. Though, I left the review here because it will be really harsh to put it on the book when it's still not cooked enough.

                              Ninestar619_5803
                              The premise and story are good. Can't wait to see The Emperor get his revenge! But the glaring problem is most of the time, you're not using the right English words (Though I can understand what you mean because I read a lot). The grammar is good tho.

                                  Hello, my book is teen fiction. Though most of the characters are teenagers. Just like I'm so I'm still learning to write mature books. However, I'd love someone to tell me how everything is. I'm not an English speaker so my grammars might be _quite....😂

                                  http://wbnv.in/a/8ahgUr5

                                    Xero_5825
                                    It's goood, very good! Finally, someone writes a good prologue and first 5 chapters well. I like the world-building and how you introduced the side characters. But for the MC, you seemed to restraint his character so much. Why?

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