JA_Chrysant
Thanks for your efforts
Well, It's understandable. I think you haven't read many transmigration novels. I will work on this chapter to show 'How he transmigrated in another body'
Sorry for the inconvenience

    JA_Chrysant That is understandable, but keep in mind that she's still afraid of Abaddon, after all, there are a lot of different factors when it came to conversations and one of them is age and strength. Lilith and Abaddon are both old monsters who lived for so long, so her manner of speak isn't that full of emotion, plus she is fearful like I said. But obviously I'll try to work on the character dialogues way more to improve it. Your review is honestly helpful, but you can you tell me if the story makes you read more than that, or is it boring?

        Choka
        Oh, I actually went past 5 chapters. Besides the character, everything else is fun!

            [Congratulations, Terranian survivor #99598, for activating the Universe Assistance System!]

            Althea, along with the remaining 1% of the population of their home planet, stared at the holographic screen in front of them in confusion.

            Their galaxy was apparently ending, and suddenly announcements from an alien system appeared in their heads, telling them they would be permanently transfered to another world.

            The survivors were all very depressed. First they were forced to survive in a zombie apocalypse, and now they had to survive a new world altogether?

            It just so happened that Althea was one of the few people who got the Lord Token, the ticket to controlling a territory---a supposed safe haven for her people.

            Althea looked at her very large stomach and sighed at an unknown future.

            Would she be able to build a good home for her children and fellowmen?

            And... would she and her husband find each other again?

            Tags: #Josei, #Apocalypse, #Infrastructure, #KingdomBuilding, #Romance, #Game Elements, #System #LitRPG

            https://www.webnovel.com/book/altera-city-in-another-world_25926694405418805

              Out of Existence

              Out of Existence

              A journey of a man through the history of another world, from its creation up to its end.

              A journey to a new universe, discovering how other universes were made and it's corresponding universal laws, how worlds were made and came to be.

              The story is full of misunderstandings, as to show how every individual has a unique world.

              The story contains, sword and magic, technological advancement, gods and their unique intances, life lessons, and bland humor.
              Link: Out of Existence

                I only have a couple of chapters online and I know it's not everyone's cup of tea but if you do choose to review mine, please be honest, I could only improve if by honest reviews.

                [https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-royal-token_26014691506926705/01_69849876241906885]

                She is a commoner, but there is nothing at all common about her. Her beauty seems to rise from the earth like a phoenix rises from the ashes. It didn’t take long before the royal men noticed her. She was courted by all kinds of men from the common people to dukes and even princes, they came from all over the world to ask her hand in marriage. Yet she refused all.
                Cecily never believed she could become royalty until she laid eyes on a young royal prince, who’s token of love would put her behind bars.

                  Wow, I just left for work and there are so many books. Let's see...

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