NewbieJimjim thanks a lot!! well, it all depends on luck. i have seen some very successful books with weirdAss names like Really LONG...translated type work or something...
If they are that successful, then it really puts a lot of uncertainty into the hearts of writers like me...

    I can hardly keep track of the love My readers are showing.
    I will try to give credit where I can. But Please, keep in mind, that you were the first to take an interest in my work...you will always be remembered.
    @MansonFD7
    @Rarajasmin_jazz
    @GEEGEE
    @UelUel
    @xish101
    @Penality
    @B_l_a_n_k_2167
    @WrightBrothers
    @KingVinito
    @Dungeon_Warrior
    @Patrik_Crown
    @intothedarkabyss
    And so many more!! I cannot track all of you…But you are and will be remembered as long as my work lives.

      ToufiqUlAlam

      Done.

      I think it'll be better if you do lots of rephrasing with some rephrasing website like Quillbot/ProWritingAid to make some sentence felt better to read.

      In which means, it should be slightly complex, but easy to understand.

      And with some advices I've give on every paragraphs' comments, hope this'll help.

      Or maybe, we could beta read each other for more, or even as crazy as discussing our book in our discord's DM.

          MansonFD7 we can!! I was thinking of creating a BETA readers' channel but I am not good with discord!! I will definitely link up!!! thanks!!! I will look into the websites you told me to look into...

            MansonFD7 Quillbot/ProWritingAid

            I use grammerly but I cannot get access to the Premium and if these two also wants me to get premium, I cannot do that. 😃
            I don't have credit card.... hehehe...otherwise, I would access the hell out of all sorts of readymade help out there!!! But hopefully someday, I will!!
            Things may change...that's why I am still keeping the book as paused.

                Hi guys!!! Lots of love to your!!! I have come here with another request!!!
                This book is in development as a part of 'AyodaleVerse'...heroes will meet together in future to bring an end to the evil!!

                https://www.webnovel.com/book/strange-tales-of-a-little-mystic-book-one_27462978606833505
                Like always, reading, commenting and reviewing and collection, PLEASE PLEASE!!! Take time!!! but let me know what do you feel about the story!

                intothedarkabyss thank you very much!!! I would love to know what's going wrong or right...I definitely appreciate...
                As we don't have ability to hire editors, we authors help each other find mistakes and help each other...
                You are a pro at this. Your help will sure be credited as I do for everyone else.
                Thank you very much.
                I have two books. One book just ended...
                https://www.webnovel.com/book/aboron-book-one---a-dystopian-prelude_27234960406111505
                and the other one is in progress...
                https://www.webnovel.com/book/strange-tales-of-a-little-mystic-book-one_27462978606833505

                you can take your time...and you don't have to be so formal. Just point out mistakes or suggestions in general as I cannot afford a pay. thank you very much!!

                    Patrik_Crown

                    Hey! Thank you so much for the kind words. It won't be a problem since I use this opportunity to improve my English. Although, I wouldn't be able to work on it frequently — since the real world can be a little annoying. Just drop the link and let me know if there's anything I need to add.

                    I'll work on it for sure.

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