shadowdrake27
Ah, thanks. I don't think that italics are possible on webnovel though.
Nathair_Insint
- Mar 19, 2024
- Joined Feb 8, 2019
The idea seems interesting. But if it's causing you to have suicidal thoughts then you should probably avoid causing your psyche harm.
shadowdrake27 Wait, exclamation and question marks in a spoken sentence are placed outside the quotation marks? As in: "I hate you."! instead of "I hate you!" ?
And how do you show that something is the thoughts of a character instead of general narration, if you don't put thoughts in quotation marks?Inviting friends or buying it. And possibly the webnovel quizzes and stuff that says you might be able to earn ss from it.
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https://www.webnovel.com/book/13813859705421105/How-To-End-The-Game-Of-A-God
This is my book. Chapter 21 was a first attempt at horror and I would love to know where I went wrong and what I did right. Thanks.Edit: the story is written in British English. So if you don't want to edit it because of that then it's no problem.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13813859705421105/How-To-End-The-Game-Of-A-God
Isekai novel about a lich that is forced to act as a villain in a game for a god's amusement.
Fantasy
I would appreciate any feedback or advice.Interesting, very interesting.
Title: How To End The Game Of A God
Author Name: ChaosFawn
Genre: Fantasy
Synopsis: A Lich is thrown into a fantasy world by a cruel god of light. With a system and many powerful teachers, he must conquer both game... and god.
I would like to get a picture of a lich, wearing paladin armour and with a black snake coiled around his neck.dkcpkmn Looks interesting, I will read it and do a review. Would you like me to give you some constructive criticism when I finish reading it?
Here is my novel, https://www.webnovel.com/book/13813859705421105/How-To-End-The-Game-Of-A-God
I would love to get some advice on what I'm doing right and wrong.00:00 on Monday is the time that power stone weekly rankings reset.
At the moment the timer seems to be at GMT +8I don't think that you can, just uninstall the app.
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kazesenken I really enjoy your novel. The characters seem very suited to the typical anime style and I can very easily visualise them. I also liked the world building that you have done -especially the demons. The only thing I thought was weird, was the beginning of the second volume. I don't know if I was just unobservant, but from my perspective that whole thing kinda came out of the blue.
I like the quirky and interesting characters, but I find the contrast of that against the darker parts of the story -like the beginning of volume two and the recent chapter with Cornelius- is a bit immersion breaking. I haven't seen any problems with the english and the writing has a good flow. I hope that we get more development on Katsys and that not every character turns out to be concealing a web of dark secrets.
All in all, it's a very interesting novel and I await the next chapter -and the eventual light novel and anime, of course.
Nathair_Insint Second chapter has been updated. Thanks for the help.
BeriAH In terms of the main character, he doesn't really have a motivation. He has been thrust into this strange world and he doesn't know what to do.
BeriAH Thanks, I will go over the second chapter when I have time. I have already edited the first chapter.
BeriAH I don't have a direct inspiration, I take bits and pieces from everything that I've read. The idea just came to me at one point, and I decided that it would make a good book.
This is my first attempt at writing, so the first chapter was a little rough around the edges in many places -but also more humorous than other chapters. I have tried to re-write the first chapter a bit, using the critique that I have gotten.
The summary thing is basically foreshadowing and I have edited it so that this is more clear. I am grateful for the critique that you have given.
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https://www.webnovel.com/book/13813859705421105/How-To-End-The-Game-Of-A-God
My novel, 11 chapters. this sounds interesting and I would love an honest review. Oh, and chapter comments are good.- Edited
Gayu2594
Sorry, I really don't read romance. I don't think that I would be able to help you.- Edited
DragonlordX
There would be easier, and if I were to ask you the same question?Interesting,
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13813859705421105/How-To-End-The-Game-Of-A-God
Here is mine, it's an Isekai set in a fantasy world. I would love to get some constructive criticism.