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Friend,
Neither your command of the American Language OR your writing style can be greatly changed over the short haul. You need to writeârewrite and then write some more.
To improve your command of the American LanguageâEEâŚWatching movies in American or talking with fluent American speakers is goodâbut for writingâI think that you should READ.
Light novels tend to beâwell, shall we say, Indifferent translated. You will pick up broken type American there. It is kinda like learning Japanese watching Anime.
Go to Gutenberg and download some good authors. Both Hemingway and Jack London were known for their simple declarative sentences. Edgar Rice Burroughs and H Rider Hagrid are good writing examples to try to emulate. If you read them attentively, good American will seep into your conscious subliminally.
Donât expect a FAST change. Ainât likely to happen. Persevere.
Saxon Violence