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They probably post at a lower rate. So their novels have been on the site longer. And so, more people see it, more views.
I don't think views matter that much.
I'm general, if you have 500 collections in 1 month, you are doing absolutely fantastic. I think. =)

If the work is terrible, I'm not interested.
If the work is great, don't leave me hanging.
Thanks

Delliiriium
There is no hurry

DaddyFishGotBigPp
Woah! Such a fast reply.
Hi SeniorFishy!
Would you like me to give you some feedback on your prologue?

Book Title: When the Emperors Return
Link: Click the book title to go to the web novel page.
Synopsis
The war between the Advancement Federation and the Lightborn Empire had been raging on for half a century now.
The winner shall become the ruler of the world!
Yet, by trend, it appeared that the war of attrition shall last another century.
Until one day.
An ordinary village boy received the inheritance of a powerful ancient organization.
With these resources, his path to become the strongest being in the world is now unhindered.
But, as the only and the last member of the Return organization, he must complete Return's mission:
To return peace to the world! To return unity to the people! To restore vitality to lands of desolation!
How will he hide when both superpowers seek to destroy him when he is weak?
How will he cleanse the world of hatred when he has absolute power?
A village boy walked out a pine forest. The legend of the last emperor has began!

Current Contestants: Me (Mist_Walker)
Other Rewards?? Is anyone willing to offer other rewards?

Inspired by author Clowniac, I decided to open up a new contest for us new authors with different rules.

How to join:
Leave your book title, synopsis, and link in the comments.

Rules:
1. New Year: Join the contest before Jan 10th, 2019. The contest ends on Jan 31st, 2019
2. New Author: You became an author after Jan 1st, 2018 on webnovel. (If you have been writing before this, the advantage for you is too big. You probably have a fan base already.)
3. New Novel: The novel began after November 2018.
4. At least 500 words / day (As we all know, update stability is quite important in retaining readers)
5. The work must be original. (No plagiarism here!)

Winner:
On Feb 1st, 2019, the author with the highest number of power stones on their book entry wins.

Rewards:
I think a book recommendation for the winner in the auxiliary volume for at least 3 days is fair? (So everyone recommend the winner's work in their own webnovel page)

This is a lighthearted contest and a challenge to build daily writing habits. I think we can work things out if there is trouble.

ArcaneDragon
Hi ArcaneDragon!
I did a review for you.
I think maybe review / study grammar rules and break long paragraphs apart? (i.e. last paragraph of ch3)
Also render the transition between scene to scene? Like what happened between MC's mother's death and MC becoming a beggar?
The basic setting is flawless. Development is also good. Hope this helps! Keep up the good work!

MishaK
Hi MishaK!
I left you a review. Here is some other feedback:
First of all, can you change the chapter title?
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 is a little weird.
Also, can you explain the social setting more? Because arranged marriage is a pretty old tradition in most part of the world now.
The writing quality is great! I see a bright future for your work. Hope this helps!
Here is a link to my work: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12519833905731105

luoshenhua
Hi luoshenhua! I did a review for your book.
Here's some additional feedback:
As a fan of cultivation literature, I had no trouble understanding what you meant by the cultivation terms like
"tribulation clouds", "heart devil", and "outer sect disciple" so I enjoyed the read. I am not sure about new readers?
Maybe explain why lightening is striking her? If she passes the tribulation, where does she go? If she fails, what happens?
Yep. In conclusion, for people familiar with the terms, it's definitely a good read!
Hope this helps!
Here is the link to my work:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12519833905731105

rrrnnn
Hi Ran_Aml! I just did a review for your book.
For things you can improve on: I think the plot and setting is solid. The pace is also good. Just the tenses. For example:
"Her name is Callaluna. Her parents left her in front of the orphanage when she was just a baby with a promise to take her back. But, they never come. "
You mean "But, they never cAme."??
Hope this helps!
Here is the link to my work:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12519833905731105

great_gamer
Hey god_of_pleasure. I left a review about positive feedback and personal feedback on your book page.
I'll write the constructive criticism here:
first sentence of your synopsis is a run-on sentence. Incorrect in terms of grammar. Not sure if you did it on purpose for other reasons. I think breaking it with period should be fine?
Also, try to keep the tenses the same?
"Her voice didn't escape Harry's ear, so he got into the business with newfound energy from a listening voice that could melt anyone's heart just by hearing.
Suddenly he remembers a system and a cheeked potion which can help him, though due to the unstable soul he can't use magic, it wouldn't stop from using a potion."
You got past and present all mixed up.
Overall, the book is great! The basic setting is very interesting.
Please give me a review when you have time.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12519833905731105

gusdefrog
Thanks gusdefrog! I'll take a look at techpixie.net right now

AerynSun
Try to remove the space between [title] (link)?
You can press the eye button beside post reply button to see what will be posted

Norah_Koch
Thank you Norah_Koch for the reply. Did setting it to zero + date work out?

UnjustlyUnderpaid
Thank you Zhen_Xin and Forsaken123. Yep. You guys are right. I followed your advice and changed my synopsis now. Hopefully it's a bit better.
Zhen_Xin, do you have a novel? It's a review swap after all. It would be bad of me if I'm the only one reaping the benefits.
Once again, thanks guys for your help!

UnjustlyUnderpaid
A critique would be great. Thank you!

Acutelittletrap
Thanks for the advice. Now that you mention it, I realize the lack of hook too.
I'll probably have to change the synopsis to make it more clear too.
Yep. There is a lot of world building. Basically a village boy given the burden to revive powerful peace seeking individuals to end the world war.

Acutelittletrap
a real review here would be great

Acutelittletrap
Hi Forsaken123, I'm the first to write a review. Woohoo! Proud of myself.
Could you give me some feed back on my novel too? Thanks in advance.
Here is the link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12519833905731105