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BerriApplepi I tried to read, but i kept getting hung up on the grammar. Have you triedd contacting LightHouse on the Inkstone Discord ?

Elude Let me know once you decide to write a novel And I'm glad that you enjoyed it since I'm still working on how to write a proper story Thank you for giving it a try

MeloncholyKay Nope, I haven't tried it yet since I don't have a discord xD

I'm still working on my grammars tho hahaha that's why I decided to write so that I can improve

I dont have stones left
How can i earn spirit stones anyway??

Elude i think it's piqued tho... i'm not really sure

Elude do you mind reviewing mine? i've heard you reviewed a lot of novels honestly, i think i also need one. there are only seven chapters tho.

Check my book too it only has one chapter so it won't take much time and please give me feedback https://m.webnovel.com/book/11888098305596105

BerriApplepi definitely haha. You should definitely get one. People there can give you some amazing advice!

MeloncholyKay Okay! I'll go get one! Thank you for this

yosi

When you end a sentence, use a space after the period.
" end. I " example.

If your asking a question, even if in novels, use a question mark.

Please use commas.

On the phone, so i cant pick apart your story to a further degree, but you should look into getting an editor.

I like the idea and look forward where you take it

MeloncholyKay Oh! Okay! Thank you ≧∇≦ It's actually the character's but I'll go change it.

MeloncholyKay How can I join a chat in discord?

Can someone check out my novel and point out my mistakes
https://m.webnovel.com/book/12200080106081005

MeloncholyKay
I've read a few paragraphs and I think its nice. I would love to read it.

Overlord_Venus
Had to stop reading. Please put spaces after commas. ",". If you're on a computer with english settings crtl+ f. Search using , or . Then hit the space bar it should highlight the entered stuff

Adraik Sorry man, but i had a hard tine getting through ththe beggining. I ended up rearranging sentences in my head>.< one particular annoyance was the beggining, the present speak then jumping to past tense.

Annoyance was when he entered the room and you used - - instead of commas. I suggest running it through grammarly

Another was "The Royal Family Castle"
It should be "the Royal Family's castle" " 's" for a single entity's posession etc

I cant pick it apart in detail, as im on my phone, but maybe when i do ill go into detail

BerriApplepi make sure have it downloaded then you need to have a link to the server. Inkstone has a link in the bottom left corner

As for mobile idk

yangsterlosio Go onto the main site, around your profile picture there should be a button saying earn more stones