MeloncholyKay please read my book as well I'll check it out and leave a comment :)
Read my story?
BerriApplepi Grammarly salesperson here. If you want to improve your grammar, try out that service to start with, it's free :grin:
Gonna join in on this too! Any feedback is a good feedback, guys
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12203458605078605
Thanks, I'll be going over yours too :)
SuperFail
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11598545905447305 cough I came back because I forgot to add my book cough
MeloncholyKay I did use the spaces, maybe it didn't work in inkstone, I'll change it, thanks
WinterBud You can gladly fuck off and just take all my 5-star chapter reviews and my sub. >;[
Make me feel inferior.
DragonKnight531 What's with the format...?
guys ... did you encounter a problem when you tried to publish your first chapter? when they ask me for my email and i give it to them they say "EMAIL ALREADY EXIST" what is thisss??? it is driving me crazy
MeloncholyKay Sorry? If you're not joking, I'm sorry, but I didn't receive any reviews from posting here (or anywhere else really). People here just don't really give those out so easily (I think? Maybe only to me?) Anyway, sorry for breathing
WinterBud It was a joke.
Hi!
I would love to get some suggestion on my writing as well.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12215177006104305/The-Hero's-Supplier
Thank You
HeavenShatterer Make sure you're signed into the proper account. That being said, if you sign in with facebook, google or the other option besides login with email, you'll have a seperate account from when you sign in with "login with your email."
I found this out when I signed in with my Gmail, but when I sign in with email, it's a different account. So I have two accounts with one email oddly enough. So you'll have to tinker with that.
MeloncholyKay Ok, thanks, that still counts as feedback
I'm not too great in explaining, so I just edited a little of your chapter. You can see below on other ways it could have been phrased.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ndzKVieZBvAZmgIbstGp6jYZ3k9mcQQhmMWZX4qov50/edit?usp=sharing
WinterBud Your story is amazing and I'm following it now, but I was joking with you earlier.
MeloncholyKay winterbud's story was amazing enough to make me feel inferior tbh
MeloncholyKay care to clarify? What format?? (⊙_☉)
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WinterBud I'll check yours out!
Guys come on T.T
I mean, thank you so much for the compliment, but "making you feel inferior" -- reading that made my blood run cold (literally. I didn't know there was a reason that expression exists). I'm probably a lot older than you guys, I've had more years of practice (and wasted so much more time "studying" by binge-reading/watching stories :P). I wish I started serializing way earlier, I could also have practiced having a tough skin. Sorry for this largely aimless reply, guys, just woke up :grin: thanks again
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DragonKnight531 your one liners