Adraik Sorry man, but i had a hard tine getting through ththe beggining. I ended up rearranging sentences in my head>.< one particular annoyance was the beggining, the present speak then jumping to past tense.

Annoyance was when he entered the room and you used - - instead of commas. I suggest running it through grammarly

Another was "The Royal Family Castle"
It should be "the Royal Family's castle" " 's" for a single entity's posession etc

I cant pick it apart in detail, as im on my phone, but maybe when i do ill go into detail

      BerriApplepi make sure have it downloaded then you need to have a link to the server. Inkstone has a link in the bottom left corner

      As for mobile idk

          Elude how do I get people to read my book "Superfail"? The one review I got said nothing about the book. PS can you check out my book?

              BerriApplepi Grammarly salesperson here. If you want to improve your grammar, try out that service to start with, it's free :grin:

                  guys ... did you encounter a problem when you tried to publish your first chapter? when they ask me for my email and i give it to them they say "EMAIL ALREADY EXIST" what is thisss??? it is driving me crazy

                    MeloncholyKay Sorry? If you're not joking, I'm sorry, but I didn't receive any reviews from posting here (or anywhere else really). People here just don't really give those out so easily (I think? Maybe only to me?) Anyway, sorry for breathing

                        HeavenShatterer Make sure you're signed into the proper account. That being said, if you sign in with facebook, google or the other option besides login with email, you'll have a seperate account from when you sign in with "login with your email."

                        I found this out when I signed in with my Gmail, but when I sign in with email, it's a different account. So I have two accounts with one email oddly enough. So you'll have to tinker with that.

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