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So_mi My family use to really hate when I would say idiot. But now they all curse all the time also, I never got pizza! Rude!

But! If you guys need some feedback, leave me the book title and I’ll be able to read through it this weekend and leave you a review! No promises on whether I’ll keep it in my library...lol I get busy with work, friends, life, and writing my own (The Hitting Zone). But I still like reading the most!

You can add me on discord as well: half_empty #4390

half_empty I am taking your offer. I do need feedback!

The link for my novel is:
[links] https://www.webnovel.com/book/12386178405369505/Witch-Zanthia%C2%B4s-Little-Shop-of-Horrors

There are lots of lonely chapters waiting for comments. Any kind of comment will be aprecciated, even if it just xp.

And a review would be great!

By the way, only @So_mi can give you the pizza but you can always ask @Xiaoyiyi8 for strawberries. Just be careful, the last guy that eat them end up a dead fish...

So_mi with me being a perfectionist too with a lazy ass side overpowering it, I could totally relate to you. The comments section is like a deserted place... and its hard to distinguish whether there are ppl reading it or appreciating it. Majority of the users/readers in webnovel are silent types... so I slowly learn how to not care abt this certain parts and just gonna write and publish because im just in the mood to publish.

I just hope your novel will be known soon. I'm also working on mine but i'm worried i'll get writer's block back again when I reach 3 or 5 chapters.

randomgal23 Maybe this will help you if you get a block again.

Quote of a previous post in this same thread:

One trick I have, (not sure I can call it my style, more like a thing I often choose to do when i am stuck), is picking two or three seemingly unimportant details (like and object or a word in a phrase) and then ask myself "Why is this thing here? How can be useful for the growth of the characters. Is there a way to use it to move the story forward?

For example: candy, dinamite or even a joke or a name in a dialogue of a secondary character.

The responses to this questions help me continue developing it into the core of a future chapter.I then plan how to insert that particular element in the story, perhaps not inmediately but a couple of chapters later.
It may not be so great a technique but it works just fine in order to build a solid sense of depth in the novel.

half_empty omg i was restocking pizza! Here ya goo sorry for the delay

GabrielDetchans thank you so muchhhh

randomgal23 for uuuuuuuu and yuss not caring will make it hurts less after all

So_mi waah thanks xD

DaddyFishGotBigPp VERY GOOD FISHY! Here is pizza without toppings

So_mi Amazing work! We are now taking the very first step towards world domination!

So_mi sure that would be interesting.

Lord_of_sleep yaaay

So_mi I relate to you

IvoryDragon yaay i hve another comrade! for u hehe

So_mi yuhhhzzzz