half_empty I am taking your offer. I do need feedback!

The link for my novel is:
[links] https://www.webnovel.com/book/12386178405369505/Witch-Zanthia%C2%B4s-Little-Shop-of-Horrors

There are lots of lonely chapters waiting for comments. Any kind of comment will be aprecciated, even if it just xp.

And a review would be great!

By the way, only @So_mi can give you the pizza but you can always ask @Xiaoyiyi8 for strawberries. Just be careful, the last guy that eat them end up a dead fish...

    So_mi with me being a perfectionist too with a lazy ass side overpowering it, I could totally relate to you. The comments section is like a deserted place... and its hard to distinguish whether there are ppl reading it or appreciating it. Majority of the users/readers in webnovel are silent types... so I slowly learn how to not care abt this certain parts and just gonna write and publish because im just in the mood to publish.

    I just hope your novel will be known soon. I'm also working on mine but i'm worried i'll get writer's block back again when I reach 3 or 5 chapters.

        randomgal23 Maybe this will help you if you get a block again.

        Quote of a previous post in this same thread:

        One trick I have, (not sure I can call it my style, more like a thing I often choose to do when i am stuck), is picking two or three seemingly unimportant details (like and object or a word in a phrase) and then ask myself "Why is this thing here? How can be useful for the growth of the characters. Is there a way to use it to move the story forward?

        For example: candy, dinamite or even a joke or a name in a dialogue of a secondary character.

        The responses to this questions help me continue developing it into the core of a future chapter.I then plan how to insert that particular element in the story, perhaps not inmediately but a couple of chapters later.
        It may not be so great a technique but it works just fine in order to build a solid sense of depth in the novel.

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            So_mi This Fish has no Discord, but will care to spend some minutes downloading it as long you give me that pizza (โ‰งฺกโ‰ฆ*)

            Edit: btw, This Fish has just advanced to the 50+ words stage of his prologue and is proud, so flatter him.

                So_mi

                Why U bully This Fish?! (ร’ ็šฟ ร“ โ•ฌ)
                You've courted death long enough, so now die!! ( ใ†-ยด)ใฅ๏ธปโ•ฆฬตฬตฬฟโ•คโ”€โ”€ (หšโ˜หšโ€)/
                And a "pew" echoed that night

                Status: Download Discord

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