GabrielDetchans Thanks for the review, I just saw it.

I have changed the synopsis as you advised and I would to know what do you think about the new one.

Synopsis:

As red tentacles bursted from the ground the whole planet trembled and fell into chaos.

It was the beginning....the beginning of the end.

Earth was destroyed with the attack of the mysterious creature known as The Ruin.

The Terrene Protectorate, the defenders of the universe were left in shambles after the attack in Earth.

Only a few people were able to flee from the planet before it's complete destruction.

John Connor, an 18 years old fresh graduate Protector, was one of those lucky enough to survive and escape.

Armed only with his dubious expertise and a few tools, he will have to avoid the dangers of a universe without the Terrene Protectorate can offer, repair his ship, restore the symbol of a defunct organization and carry the burdens of the fate of the universe that lies on his shoulders.

Surviving in this chaotic era won't be easy for our inexperienced John Connor.

With the end of the Terrene Protectorate, numerous factions that were once dormant, will rise up and start to fight for power. Outlaws, fanatics, greedy corporations, and governments, the conflict of interests of those groups and factions will lead to an unimaginable amount of deaths.

Follow John Connor as he explores the wonders of the endless universe, and discover how harsh and unforgiving reality can be.

      Thanks for the thread. Here's mine.

      Title: Zaldizko

      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12594753605041105/Zaldizko

      Logline: Famine is a man who will do anything, fight anyone to save his three brothers who have been kidnapped. A gunslinging, sword fighting action-adventure wild ride to rescue the family.

      Blurb: "I'll find a way to save my brother. Do whatever the hell you want. I'm stealing your guns."

      Famine is a man determined to save his three brothers after they were tragically separated when a magical fire destroyed their monastery home. He finds himself in a foreign city called Apocalypse. There he falls in with the Evadale Knight Order security group, which guards the Hell's Labyrinth prison facility. The prison's system goes haywire upon his arrival.

      Amongst prison chaos, Famine learns that his missing brothers are somewhere within the area. He'd do anything to save and reunite his family, even if it meant fighting malignant redback spiders and a mind-sucking demon. The fights he faces may be more than he can handle.

      This is volume one of the Seriphyn Knight Chronicles.

      It begins.

        Sorry, plugging another story. No more, promise :)

        Title: To My Sunflower
        Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12685931606615605/To-My-Sunflower-(BL)
        Rating: PG

        Blurb: Hinata is waiting for Eiji to come home from fighting in the war. He receives a letter filled with the scent of sunflowers and his lover's tender words. A story set at the end of the Japanese Pacific War, 1945 as told from the perspective of same-sex lovers Hinata and Eiji.

        More than a boys love, this book is about the heart and soul of people surviving the final climax of WWII.

        Two sides of the war on Japanese soil are shown.

          anne_2 Have I reviewed your novel? If not could you please post the link again as a reply to my post?

              anne_2
              Hey, anne, I reviewed ur novel. It was nice and all but u need to work a little with the editing. Read ur chapters twice before posting and it will become 5 star chaps, I guarantee that!!

                  anne_2 I am unable to find a review button... I don't know why... Maybe its a small glitch in the system which will get rectified soon...

                      great_gamer In queue but expect me to write the review next week kindah busy tomorrow i have a lot of cakes and pastries orders for 6 occasions dated( 19, 20, 21) and organize a party too

                        JunkieOverThe_Moon Thank you, I'll do what you say.😚 its just that when i write I'll never read it again due to shortage of time (work and business) real life strugles😔 but then thank you.

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