Hey, guys! I know this post isn't necessary, but I've found myself some time (finally) to read and review your promoted novels in this thread. Hopefully I can finish reading everything by today.

I'm here to beg for forgiveness for any harsh reviews that might come your way or comments that may offend you in any way possible. I'm a bit particular about grammar, which is funny, since my own work has a lot of flaws. But I've been learning English practically my whole life, so I can get pretty critical with it. I'm not good at writing my own stories but I've been told that I can be quite the harsh critic (sorry for my impertinence). I don't expect you to return the... favour? If that's what you can call it... so don't feel too pressured.

Do note that I'm a layman and thus my opinions does not matter. If possible, just ignore my reviews, please. ._.

Apologies in advance for any rude or harsh remarks that may go your way. Really, I'm sorry.

Thanks for recommending your works.

    ihateyounot As long as the feedback is constructive not destructive, that's all good. Constructive feedback is golden to an inspiring author.

    There's also providing feedback on the the story itself for plot holes, character impressions, flow and so forth. You can have a story that is grammatically sound, but lacks on storytelling conventions and mechanisms. Usually, this is more important to a writer than picking out their grammar. Grammar can be eventually fixed in final draft stages.

        Veronica8 That's true, but I'm quite petty so grammar is the first thing I notice in any works. It's a bad habit of mine. //sigh// It's mostly because I don't have much talent in storytelling so I can't be helpful to anyone since I lack the creative capacity to give that kind of constructive feedback. Case in point: my own novel can't hold a candle to a lot of novels in this thread in terms of creative richness. Yes this is me shamelessly plugging my own novel huehueh

            ihateyounot I'm actual cool if someone points out my grammar flaws, since LanguageTool can only point out so much for me XD. I think you're selling yourself short. I've checked your novel and it's pretty solid. Keep writing it. :)

                MishaK Sure, although my story is YA Fantasy, Action-Adventure with Shounen Ai, so I'm not sure if it would be your cup of tea considering the protagonist is gay. I'm happy for a swap review. Let me know what story you would like me to read. Zaldizko is the story I'd like reviewed.

                Cheers :smile:

                    Shameless plug of my novels. I hope someone will try to read hehe. Thanks~ ♥ xoxo

                    Currently a new one for a the Enemies to Lovers writing contest
                    https://www.webnovel.com/book/12818121606527605/Remember-That-I-Love-You

                    And another one which has a very slow update. I will update it soon! I'm just sorting out the chapters lol.
                    https://www.webnovel.com/book/12244122606146005/Inevitably-Trapped-With-The-Amorous-Husband

                      Veronica8 Reviewed it and added to my library. Looking forward to more chapters. I like the fact that u wrote long chapters

                        StenDuring
                        I just got up, I'm a slow reader but a fast typer so it may take a while for the review if there's a lot of chapters. to be completely honest I've never wrote anything before, I can't write a essay to save my life ether. I'm both doing this for fun and to be the first to make something for this series on this site. because of the second though I do want to make something really good. I probably do need a few assistants to help me out after that review. but I don't exactly have money to pay assistants...if you had any down time or felt like it would you mind helping me out with the fanfic?

                            Title: I Left the World as Villager A, but Suddenly Became a Mecha Pilot.

                            Genre: A mix of scifi, mecha and fantasy (Takes more of an inspiration from Korean and Japanese LNs, but I'll try hard not to turn it into a chore to read)

                            Synopsis: Myst Evrard was your typical rural village kid. He once dreamed of fame and a life of adventure but quickly gave up on the idea after realizing he just wasn't cut out for that sort of stuff.

                            It didn't really help that his childhood best friend became a monster and demon slaying hero and his first crush turned out to be a long lost princess of the kingdom.

                            As he finally resolves himself to live a mundane village life, he suddenly encounters an unfortunate accident and dies.

                            Just when he thought things couldn't possibly get any worse...

                            But when he opened his eyes next, fully expecting to find himself in the netherworld, what he saw was...

                            A giant robot?!

                            What the heck was going on?

                            He's unexpectedly "transmigrated" into the body of Ryuu Creed - a guy who was suddenly thrust in the midst of political turmoil and military intrigue because of his family, and forced into the role of a test pilot for a top secret military project.

                            Will "Alice" find the way back through the "Looking Glass"?

                            Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12812950405462405

                            Do check it out if the genre interests you. Could do review swaps too. Go ahead and tag me. Might post them on the weekends if I'm too busy with my job on weekdays. Thanks in advance guys :)

                              https://www.webnovel.com/book/12834608106610305/Runeless

                              Newer Story

                              8 chapters proligue
                              2 chapters MC

                              So far.

                              Because of one flaw Kals world is turned upside down. Those he called feiends shun and beat him The family he knew all his short life are planning to sell him and the worst part is the kingdom he lives in wished he was never born. Runeless and fighting for survival in a kingdom that only sees him for profit or servitude.

                              Was it always like this? Can I survive it?

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