Book_Keeper when you have the time could you do a review and or assessment on my story?
Novel Assessments & Reviews: Empowering Writers & Helping Readers
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Hi there I would also love if you could read my webnovel too and give it a review.
Book title : Falling in love with you was the best thing that ever happened to me !! My soldier !!!
Author name/ Pen name : Pakohoshino29
Current chapters : 15
Genre : Romance fiction
Link : https://m.webnovel.com/book/1267939900558205
Thank you in advance sir !
I would truly appreciate it if you find time to review my work.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/12316009105249005?pageIndex=1&orderBy=1&bookId=12316009105249005#reivews
And I would be glad if you write down some suggestions to improve it... Thanks in advance...
BTY, It's my first experience writing a novel. Expect a lot of error...haha
Book_Keeper Do you mind checking mine out too? I would appreciate any review, comment, and constructive criticisms.
Title: Destiny Forged
Genre: VRMMORPG, Martial Arts, Fantasy, Romantic Subplot, Overpowered MC.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13142328105838605/Destiny-Forged
Sypnosis:
Despite possessing unrivaled combat prowess and unparalleled instincts, he had always lived a restricted life, hidden away from the rest of the world.
However, with the appearance of the VRMMORPG, Destiny Forged, he can finally show his existence to the world and rise above the elites and experts.
Follow our protagonist as he grabs ahold of his own destiny and battle against fate.
Title: The Way of the Sword
Genre: Oriental Fantasy and BL.
Link: The Way of the Sword
Would appreciate it if someone did a candid review or comment on the chapters! Of course, we can do review exchange.
Thanks.
The World Can Go to Hell For All I Care
Synopsis-
I have one straight goal. To join the army, go into battle, earn money and glory.
Oh! Wait! I ain’t some patriotic soldier to lay down my lives for the sake of the country, no that shit is for people with some loose screw.
I just want the money so I could feed my little brother and sister, their world is only what I want to protect.
Also, I want glory so I could overwrite and clean the name of my father who tarnished the family name. We became a laughing joke in the country and even mom abandoned us. No, I don’t know if he betrayed the country or not, I don’t care. But I don’t want my little kid brother and sister to face the same mockery and hatred of the people as I did.
Just to protect the smiles of the only family I have, I would do anything.
But life knows to shit on you when things were just getting good.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13041938605448705/Broken-Caged-Heart
tragic trauma
new lease on life
finding peace
working for acknowledgement
finding fated love
DreamX You are a leech and by far the worst author I ever saw. Besides polluting the forum with useless posts, you achieve nothing. You managed to not even write more than 5 chapters for a single novel. As for your best novel, you deleted it yourself. I guess we will see you soon, in entry Contest 62 maybe? While you dropped once again a story because you can't work hard and want immediate success.
Now, will you kindly stop double spam the same message in multiple threads?
Innovation Harsh
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Rate my novel if you like it if you don’t please tell me how to improve.
The story gets more interesting as it goes
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13189662305003005
Innovation Actually I really needed those harsh words. I have been trying but every time after a few chapters I find myself totally clueless what more to write. My plotting is worse than kindergarteners. I really think I should leave writing but dont want to leave it. By the way which novel are speaking about that has been deleted??
Innovation Actuallyif I am able to complete this book, you would be the first person I would thank. Sometimes harsher words help more than motivating sweet talks.
Title: The Damn Hunter
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12138731905986405/The-Damn-Hunter
Synopsis: Yang Guang is the last hunter protecting his city from The Damn, creatures from another universe aiming to harm humans to strengthen themselves but the damn are not the only problems that Yang Guang need to face as he ventures beyond the small city into the world and discover a secret that should not be reveal for another two thousand years.
Hope you enjoy my novel :D
DreamX Novel named [Book Deleted] with 0 chapters and "Deleted" as a synopsis. Can't be more deleted than that. Except, well, truly deleting it...
Honestly, if you wasted less time on forums and more on really planning your novel, you could do it. I mean, look around you, that's just a bunch of nobodies that just decided to say "I want to write my own novel". Everyone is like that, well, some are true authors, but don't care about the two or three in the thousands of newbies.
As for my rant, it was just that I was reading a threat, saw you posting two times your contest 62. Next thread, when someone was asking a real question, the exact same situation. The three threads I read had you posting on it, not caring about the content of the thread. For example, this one, it is legit for you to post your story, even if it is not really right since it is more for asking advice than promoting a novel.
Just type, reviews shameless and you have 4-5 threads for that thing. No need to bother other people. As for your current situation, you don't need to post anything in the forums, since you don't have anything.
First: You choose one novel and you stick to it. You don't say "oh I'm bored, let's create another" NO! You choose carefully. Also, plan at least the first 30 chapters. Basically, the first arc. If it is an eastern one, basically the backstory of the MC and the first Master SteppingStone. Just, the big lines.
Second: You write at least 5 chapters. After that, you can browse the forums once again and post for reviews of others on the corresponding thread. You won't have a lot of views or collections for the moment, but after a week or so, it will be better.
Third: Well, that's on you. But a piece of advice, if you are truly incapable of creating a novel, that is possible. In that case, it will be better to stop trying and concentrate on more important things. There are things that I know I can't do, so I won't waste my time trying to do it.
UPDATE - Review Queue CLOSED
Sorry for the week absence, I basically overworked myself into a cold. I'm feeling better now, and I've reevaluated my website. I'm currently acting as a content creator (give reviews) when it's more feasible to be a content curator (select good reviews). So, that means for an indefinite amount of time, I will be closing my review queue.
I will still be doing assessments, so you can still post your stories here. I'm actually hoping that I'll be more efficient this way and will be able to provide better on-site information for readers to search and discover stories they'd enjoy. That also means I'll probably be reworking my website layout (yet again haha) to match this change.
Message for those on the Review Queue
I'm still going to do the reviews I already promised. But, if a novel hasn't...
- updated at least three times in the last month
- the most recent chapter was uploaded no more than a week ago
- at least 30 chapters or 30k words
Then I'll be putting that book off to the side. I'll review once the story becomes more active. Why add this criteria? Because feedback is pointless if a story is inactive and not updating.
Previous 3 Review queue lists: Book_Keeper
Added to Review queue: Jeanean_Lain AardwarkThe2nd stella2138 Voidmirage PeachyPearl StarsGrace Pakohoshino29 MyCharacterLeads Reflex Take_the_Moon @Critical_Kind (last one contacted me through a story comment)
Currently on: Tan_Liliu
Running Count:
15 reviews completed for a total of 556 chapters covered.
38 reviews on queue.
Innovation Sometimes giving up is a good thing. But well I lack in plotting not writing, when you know what you lack, you try to learn it. Not totally give up. What I write is not utter trash, that keeps me motivated to learn, before two months I did not even know about structuring nor about the three act structure or the hero's journey.
I have been brainstorming, learning, researching and trying. And when I feel that I have done everything but still cannot make it I will leave then. But I know the time is not now.
Sometimes you give up, but sometimes giving up is also wrong every craft needs time to learn and writing is an art with craft.
Is BookKeeper still alive? I hope he/she didn't overwork him/herself. Hmm. >3</
Book_Keeper thank you so much in adding my book in your queue.. I'll wait...