Reinesse How about a writing buddie instead. I'm not the best at finding grammar errors but I love helping out others. The saying "You scratch my back and I'll scratch your." works here. Friendship is always free.

      Reinesse okay. I'll start reading it tonight. By the way I would add a (') behide the "s" in your title

      If you see a Meichi White leave you any comments ect.. That's me. I have a different account on my phone.

          SouthToiletWizard Awwwww....they should like you for your killer personality not because you fating them up. Well I guess as long as you happy and have a good time with them that's all that matters.

              Book_Keeper Have been waiting for the ban to lift :D

              If you could kindly assess my novel Godking Ascending the Heavens, that would be a great boon!
              It is my first novel and the opening chapters are a bit rough, but I would like to know how the book stands as it is.

              It would be awesome if you could also let me know how many chapters the assessment was based on.
              This will help me figure out how much the opening chapters might be dragging the story down (if so) and if my latest chapters have shown improvement.

              A note on technical quality: I have often cut out prose and long descriptions when I felt it was cramping the pace of my novel. Even after editing I was told by readers that the pace of my story is slow. Despite this, I am now trying to reincorporate longer descriptions etc. as I felt my attempt to hasten the speed was cramping my writing style. Funny that. I'd like to hear what your opinion is on the "prose vs. pace" debate!

              Thanks ahead of time, Book_Keeper!

                  Book_Keeper Thanks a heap Book_Keeper.
                  Always get annoyed how fan-fictions and generic/unoriginal stories always get high rankings for whatever reason (poor taste of people just starting web novels usually :P).

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