Jmar225 Well long story shirt the towns people was isolated inside a bubble. No one was allowed to leave town but that didn't better because they was all perfectly happy. When a girl told her dream about wanting to see a real tree the little boy who liked her mad it his mission to find one. When the only one in existence had to be planted or else trees were lost forever. The "villain" character made all the towns folks believe that it was unnecessary and can cause illness. He did all that just to coming fooling the people into buying his products and making him rich.

This explanation of the movie is the point I was trying to make. The richest made manipulated what the people, need, want and saw but in reality they didn't need any of it.

      Jmar225
      Make it so there is a good reason for them to be friends like a same sense of humor a close personalities.

          Jmar225 I would have a scene where someone is explaining to them what's it like. So that when they see it they can compare base on their own opinion of it. Like if they are happy they would agree to it and explain what they see. If they disappointed than explain the grief and disappointment they're feeling in what they see. P.s. This is JuneChristina.

              I might be writing a love story at this point im not sure if I have a clue what it is anymore. It started as an atypical cultivation story a spoof. Then who the MC is became ambiguous. After that it might now be a romance. Idk anymore. If any of you want some cheap laughs check it out A Slackers Guide to Immortality.
              Xoxo thanks lol

                Jmar225 Good. School can eat away all your time. When I was in college I couldn't manage to draw anything persona...... everything was drawn for a grade. I even cut back on writing those five years.

                Happy Writing!

                    Have you published yet? Or still working on it? >3</

                      Sythcake The English language has too many words that sound the same. Our ancestors had it right grunt at things you like fling fresh feces at everything else.
                      #neanderthalshaditall.
                      #cromagnonfanboywagon.

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                          Slight update...I ended up pausing the story I asked for advice on. I just wanted more experience with writing before writing it. So now in short im writing a high fantasy story about life as a goblin.

                            Did someone say GOBLIN??!! (GS enters chat)

                            Sorry, I've really been into reading Goblin Slayer lately and whenever I read other manga that mentions goblins in a chapter or something someone will put in the comments a little goblin slayer meme.
                            It's pretty fun. Anyways, that's most of what I wanted to say.

                            The other part is that I get when you just need a little break from writing one story so I'm currently trying to move away from my current genre type and writing about a completely 180 from what I currently was.

                            Writer's block hits hard and doesn't leave easily (at least in my case) so I encourage you to keep writing and eventually you'll get back into your groove. Don't feel pressured. I like to believe that most people on this site are good (save for the occasional negative potato) and their comments of support helps.
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                            Hopes this helps!

                            Thank you I really appreciate it!!

                            And yea Goblin Slayer is actually the main inspiration for the story lol and the anime was one of my favorites!!...I want the same level of fucked up dark themes while also humanizing an OP goblin or two.

                              Jmar225 Glad to see a fellow GS watcher here! Personally I feel like writing dark messed up themes opens more doors than just normal censored writing. What I mean by censored is,

                              "The mage threw out his fireball, killing the enemies instantly leaving nothing but burnt marks."

                              There's no description on how they died, how the enemies felt and there's no "value" in their life, as I would put it. Just some random peons on the side of the road as fodder, soon to be forgotten. But, if it had some dark themes added to it it makes things have more "value", more realistic or weight. For example,

                              "The mage finished his spell and soon a volley of fireballs bombarded the monsters. Each shot searing into their flesh causing them immense pain. In a blind rage the monsters charged at the mage but were soon stopped when thin blades of wind diced their comrades. Their whole upper halves were cut into either three or four chunks, each sliding off each other due to the slick blood. The ones who escaped the range of the wind blades began to run in different directions out of fear. In their desperation to leave they didn't notice the barrier the mage had set up. When the first ones reached the barrier the moment they touched it sparks flew out and electrocuted the monsters. Seeing at how there was no escape the monsters finally realized the difference in power between them and the mage. The mage, upon seeing their despair filled eyes, began to move forward. With each step, one head flew. He danced and hummed to a long forgotten song as he decimated the weaklings before him. By the time all of the monsters had died he'd grown bored of this game. He lifted the barrier and left, feeling unsatisfied."

                              It may not be as dark as what you're imagining but I hope you get the gist of it. Maybe. I don't know, It's hard to explain. Anyways, keep on writing my fellow author!

                              Hopes this helps!

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