Here is my novel, I hope you will visit it, read it and give me an honest review. An honest review might help me later as a writer. Thank you all in advance.

Title: The Indomitable Mage, Ruler of The Universe

Genre: Fantasy, Magic, Fantasy Romance, Action, Adventure.

Synopsis:
How would you feel if you get trapped into a dream and how you will react to the temptation that is before your sinful eyes? What if you get killed in that mind game of the dreams, are they really lethal let alone, dreams?

To his horror when he opened his eyes, he realized that he didn't wake up yet rather was still dreaming.

He was often drifted into a dreamland of weirdness but this time, it was completely unusual. He could feel the pain, emotions of ecstasy as he was having fun in a sexual wonderland.

Although it sounded nonsensical yet satisfactory with those elven ladies serving him, but later on it brought disaster because his dreams had always ended up with terror-struck and profusely sweating awakening.

Several elven girls were serving him as his tool of enjoyment, a bewitching captive princess was there for his needs until he passed out from exhaustion hoping to wake up from this 'realistic dream'.

Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15782747106050505/The-Indomitable-Mage%2C-Ruler-of-The-Universe

    6 days later

    Title: Journey Of The Bright Immortal
    Genre: Eastern Fantasy (Xianxia)
    https://www.webnovel.com/book/11779557605524605/Journey-Of-The-Bright-Immortal

    Please like this post or send me a PM if you would like me to take a look at your novel. I don't mind reviewing it first since I'd like to check it out before agreeing to a swap. Sometimes I can't endorse a novel if I can't be honest about it. Thanks in advance for those who will take their time to review my novel.

      Title: CronoOver
      Genre: Fantasy
      Tags: Magic, gods, fantasy, romance, monsters, drama, ability, mistery
      Synopsis: Será, the power that grants humans supernatural abilities appeared one day and brought with it chaos, destruction, trouble, and people calling themselves the children of God. Rin a sixteen-year-old boy who is in search of a power that can resurrect the dead has to face all of the enemies and trouble that gets in his way, in order to save his friend.
      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/14399940206304205/CronoOver

        DarkElven6 Loved the plot!

        The only things I would recommend is that you do a read through before you post for grammar, spelling, POV and tense. There were a few instances where you had typos, and there was at least one sentence that I wasn't sure to who you were referring because the POV seemed to change.

        They were all minor things that didn't affect the story appeal in my opinion :)
        Again I loved the story line and can't wait to see where it goes from chapter 12 :D

            Scott_Crosswhite I enjoyed the ideas for both stories! I would suggest that you spend a bit more time reviewing your writing before you post, it was kind of hard to follow at times due to misspellings. (Not sure if they are typos or just misspelled.)

            One of the things I do if I realize I have a lot of typos is I read what I wrote backwards. That way I have to read each individual word slowly, and I don't accidentally skim since it's hard to read critically if I have just written a paper.

            I loved seeing the difference in writing styles between the two books, can't wait to see how your writing style changes over time :D

                Avalondra
                I didn't read the whole thing but I read enough to get into the story and I thought it was interesting, despite your small mistakes in grammar and tenses I really loved the beautiful way you described the characters and there features. That being said I would still work on your English rules in regards to the past future and present tenses as well as sentence structure. They are good considering its not your first language but I still think it would hep you out a lot

                Here are some of my stories hope you like them.

                https://www.webnovel.com/book/15823608105057805/The-Rising-of-The-Half-Demon
                This ones about a dwarf the saves a half demon from a cruel slaver.

                https://www.webnovel.com/book/15961321306649805/The-Gadgetist
                This one is set in the future and its about a boy that was given supper powers after being experimented on. I wrote it for a competition.

                Hope you enjoy!

                    Scott_Crosswhite I want someone to diss my work hehehe... Just kidding, someone who will give me an honest feedback. I have edited only a few chapters at this point. If you are interested feel free to check land warrior.

                        DarkElven6
                        I left my review in on the stories page but ill summarize it here.
                        I'm sure your aware that there are typos and missing words here and there but besides those the story itself as well as the names you gave places like Vale are all really good and quite impressive, one thing I think you might want to think about is taking a little more time on parts that were rushed through like her journey to the capital at the beginning, Even just a few more sentences describing things would probably be fine it just felt kind of like you rushed because you wanted to get to writing the good part.

                        I hope my advice was helpful Please review some of my stories as well.

                        https://www.webnovel.com/book/15823608105057805/The-Rising-of-The-Half-Demon
                        This ones about a dwarf the saves a half demon from a cruel slaver.

                        https://www.webnovel.com/book/15961321306649805/The-Gadgetist
                        This one is set in the future and its about a boy that was given supper powers after being experimented on. I wrote it for a competition.

                        Hope you enjoy!

                            Still accepting reviews and @Avalondra I apologize for not reviewing your work yet. I will post it this evening.

                            Here is the title of my work

                            Title: Land Warrior
                            Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13802069006408505
                            Story: The Story Revolves around the young Lieutenant Luis Alfonso. He is a soldier of the Republic of Easting Armed Forces, namely, in the Army. He belongs to the one of the country's elite Special Forces Unit, the 51st Greyhounds.

                            The story contains: Voilence, War and Politics.

                            Story So Far: 3rd Arc, Slaying the Beast

                            Other Things to Mention: One of my first Originals in WN.

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