Mavislin11 I reviewed your novel. You still have some work to do, before the story is good.

    Bl4ckbear The review is ready. Keep up the work, and try to spot those mangled words. There aren't that many of them. Reading each chap carefully should solve that.

      MyCharacterLeads The review is ready. Great story, I hope you develop it well, and improve at the same time. I kept it in my lib, and will read it when I have time πŸ˜ƒ

        Sigheti The review is ready. Very interesting novel. You didn't get 5 stars, only because of the release rate. Other than that, very good work. I recommend. (Stays in my lib).

          Don't know if you'd read an unfinished fanfiction or not but I'm having my first shot at it with 'Not Dead Yet' if you're keen. Thanks a ton if you are.

            Personally, I would suggest don't waste your time. I recently been getting notification "The AUTHOR deleted your review".
            I laughed at that, soon everyone will have 4.9 score of reviews (like the score right now is not bad enough as it does not represent anything really).
            Now authors can delete reviews if they want to? Some of my reviews were not to the benefit of the novel but none were meaningless so I found it funny they can delete any review they want.

              VateRise thank you very much. The release rate is slow indeed, since I only write whenever I feel like it.

                ErozothDraeor I know. But there are people who will not delete them. That is because they want to improve. So I will continue anyway. πŸ˜ƒ

                  Hi there!

                  I'd love to have you take a look at my novel if you have the time! Really nice of you to look through and do some reviews, I've had it up for about a month and haven't really had any feedback on it besides by friends.

                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/13884974405970305/Unyielding-Will

                  I currently have a Friday release schedule, hoping in the future to have enough of a backlog to increase but right now in the beginning I feel like consistency is more important.

                  Let me know what you think I should improve! Thanks!

                    https://www.webnovel.com/book/13479473305955405

                    Please have a look at my novel.
                    The synopsis:-

                    What would happen if you got stuck in Time?
                    Zia has completed her Ph.D. in Botany and has applied for the post of lecturer/ Professor. She joins a High school as a temporary teacher and is entrusted with the task of leading a group of students on a trekking /camping expedition. On the way they meet a guy who seems to be a troublemaker but later, he proves to be a pillar of strength. Early morning their camp is attacked and they flee taking a different route. But they are lost.

                    They enter a world where people are living, in hiding, for over 250 years. Their technology is much advanced as compared to ours. Their world was initially a Utopia but now it is changing due to an oppressive ruler.
                    They are trapped in the time of this hidden world and want to help the people there fight against the oppressive ruler and his cronies. The oppressive ruler wants to make a number of Time Machines by using the brains of the scientists who had died in harness at the site of the experiments.

                    They also travel to a flat manmade Earth-like satellite, which was made as a joke to taunt the scientists 7000 years ago, and which is still operational. Here they meet the inhabitants. They see a completely different world where animals, plants, rocks, water etc can talk. Before you touch anything you need to seek permission.
                    They also meet the Aliens who come to the Magical World (the flat satellite) to get supplies. They see spaceships being guided to land by the scientists of the Magical World.

                    This is not another space travel mystery of wormhole, multiverses, etc. Everything is on / near planet Earth.
                    Read on to experience their adventures, their fears, and their courage, to deal with various situations and how, after meandering through various secret passageways, encountering adventures, they finally come back to their time.
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                      JohnnyKbca Hi, the review is ready. I've read only a few chapters, but its still a good story. Keep it up, and it should join the 1M club soon πŸ˜ƒ

                        VateRise Can you check out my new novel please, just one chap, I wanna know what you think, you don't have to review, please tell me what you think in the comment section

                        I wanna know if it's worth spending my time on

                        Thank you in advance

                        Title: HEARTBREAK IS REAL

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