I will review Your novel, BUT there's a catch!
Don't know if you'd read an unfinished fanfiction or not but I'm having my first shot at it with 'Not Dead Yet' if you're keen. Thanks a ton if you are.
Personally, I would suggest don't waste your time. I recently been getting notification "The AUTHOR deleted your review".
I laughed at that, soon everyone will have 4.9 score of reviews (like the score right now is not bad enough as it does not represent anything really).
Now authors can delete reviews if they want to? Some of my reviews were not to the benefit of the novel but none were meaningless so I found it funny they can delete any review they want.
ErozothDraeor I know. But there are people who will not delete them. That is because they want to improve. So I will continue anyway.
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Hope to receive your feedback. I must say that the grammar is lame, like the syntax, the shape of the text leaves much to be desired but the content is quite interesting., IMHO. Well, to praise, each author or reader has his own view of history. Whether it is 1 star or 3 stars, your main attention. Thank.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13599217205409305/Magic-Farmer-Dara---2nd-Edition
Title: Nova Roma
Genre: History, Fantasy
The bad grammar is my breakfast, without fear of bad reviews for my bad lyrics, what matters is the story
Hi there!
I'd love to have you take a look at my novel if you have the time! Really nice of you to look through and do some reviews, I've had it up for about a month and haven't really had any feedback on it besides by friends.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13884974405970305/Unyielding-Will
I currently have a Friday release schedule, hoping in the future to have enough of a backlog to increase but right now in the beginning I feel like consistency is more important.
Let me know what you think I should improve! Thanks!
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https://www.webnovel.com/book/13479473305955405
Please have a look at my novel.
The synopsis:-
What would happen if you got stuck in Time?
Zia has completed her Ph.D. in Botany and has applied for the post of lecturer/ Professor. She joins a High school as a temporary teacher and is entrusted with the task of leading a group of students on a trekking /camping expedition. On the way they meet a guy who seems to be a troublemaker but later, he proves to be a pillar of strength. Early morning their camp is attacked and they flee taking a different route. But they are lost.
They enter a world where people are living, in hiding, for over 250 years. Their technology is much advanced as compared to ours. Their world was initially a Utopia but now it is changing due to an oppressive ruler.
They are trapped in the time of this hidden world and want to help the people there fight against the oppressive ruler and his cronies. The oppressive ruler wants to make a number of Time Machines by using the brains of the scientists who had died in harness at the site of the experiments.
They also travel to a flat manmade Earth-like satellite, which was made as a joke to taunt the scientists 7000 years ago, and which is still operational. Here they meet the inhabitants. They see a completely different world where animals, plants, rocks, water etc can talk. Before you touch anything you need to seek permission.
They also meet the Aliens who come to the Magical World (the flat satellite) to get supplies. They see spaceships being guided to land by the scientists of the Magical World.
This is not another space travel mystery of wormhole, multiverses, etc. Everything is on / near planet Earth.
Read on to experience their adventures, their fears, and their courage, to deal with various situations and how, after meandering through various secret passageways, encountering adventures, they finally come back to their time.
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JohnnyKbca Hi, the review is ready. I've read only a few chapters, but its still a good story. Keep it up, and it should join the 1M club soon
VateRise Thanks and thanks for the review.
Hi ... I have 2 ...
https://www.webnovel.com/book/14317142905964205/Life-after-a-glass-of-water
Just 3 chapters of this one ...
And 26 of this one ...
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11308004606321705/Chaos-dimensional-cube
Thanks in advance ...
Allen_Clay012 I reviewed it, not really impressed. Yaoyueyi gave you a lot of thing you can improve, but her score doesn't reflect that. She is probably too nice to do that, but I'm not. At this stage, that is the score.
By the way. I got many requests, so it will take some time to review everything. That is why, anything below this post, will not be reviewed. The thread is closed now, and I will not take any new novel for reviews. At least for now.
Love the honest attitude, so here's mine XD:
Synopsis: https://www.webnovel.com/book/14316549305962705
*A FanFic of the White Wolf video game Vampire: the Masquerade Bloodline.
Chasing after a shadow from her past, Leona entered the world of the mystical blood-thirsty undead, but the awaiting danger is far greater than she could ever imagine: the grand game of politics, the battling sides of humanity and beast in their nature, and the brutal Jyhad in the modern nights...Lost and afraid in this chaos, she has to continue on this path--because there is no going back.
Fiona_Singer Sorry, didn't see the last post :(
marjzach2012 reviewed it. I mean personally I don't like it. Objectively 3.5 stars is I think very considerative.
SharpJester I did a review on the 1st book. I'll retrain from doing the second one. If what I saw in 1st, is the same in 2nd (not the plot). Then you will get similar score. Seriously editing it and increase the release rate, would make it much much good.