Willsimulated Please read first post carefully.

2.If you are requesting a review swap with multiple people at the same time, reply to all of them in ONE POST with your novel link If not, you will be given a warning and your posts will be deleted/reformatted

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      Title: Emperor NPC
      Genre: Sci-fi Fantasy/Video Games
      Synopsis: The Demon Emperor had taken one billion lives and conquered the realms of elves, dwarfs, and giants. When the final realm of man fell to his armies, the stage was set for their world’s finale.
      A spire of brilliant light pierced the sky, and as the land was torn asunder, the demon emperor met his death. It was not by the hands of a hero, or goddess’ champion, but by a system developer—a creator of the VRMMO Ark World—masquerading as a god!
      “It’s ironic that it would be you,” said a voice in the black void of the quantum system. “Strange, that you’ve given me this quest, and stranger that I can’t do it without you.”
      By the power of the thirteenth system developer, the “goddess” Amarytha, the demon emperor was reborn in a new video game where his character never came to be. In the Ark World Sandbox, humans rule as gods over nations of NPCs. Through mastery of their administration commands, they hold absolute control. Only the demon emperor, liberated by the Player System, can challenge them.
      A crusade begins with one step. Freedom from humanity begins here!

      https://www.webnovel.com/book/15442526006533005/Emperor-NPC

      I'm open to review swaps, just message me.

        hello. i'll drop my novel on Webnovel for the first time here. feel free to look if you're bored. i am reading original and translated stories that catch my attention at my own discretion. thank you!

        Title: Destined for Talent
        Genre: Elemental, Magic, Fantasy, Action, Adventure, Drama, Tragedy, War and Military, BL
        Blurb:
        Kingdom of Crystal's Soldier Dillon Caudry had just been promoted to General Soldier of the Barrier Unit. Just when events in his life were going great, and he found a beauty he believed to be the love of his life, war struck again and he must return to a world enveloped by pain, fire, and unchanged history. It was the same thing all over again, and he knew he was at the end of his rope. His colleague, General Soldier Aster, trapped in the same net as he and grieving just as badly, never lost hope no matter their circumstances. Will he press Dillon to grow his talent once more, for the sake of their nation? Or do their people face a life of lost courage and defeated hopes?

          Willsimulated

          Haha so I know I wasn't one of the people you asked directly but I reviewed your story, its really interesting and the suspense that you managed to build up with your writing was especially good. The MC himself seemed a little bit too much like the MC from "That Time I got Reincarnated As A Slime" though. Not just the fact that he was a slime but they had very similar personalities. Another thing I noticed is that when describing the first potential hero you say that he is grinning multiple times, this kind of gives me the feeling that he is sinister rather than actually a good guy. Throughout the first three chapters I kept thinking he was going to turn on the MC at some point. Your writing and grammar are also pretty good but I noticed a few typos and missing words here and there so you might want to do another pass over your already published work.

          If you would review my story Id appreciate it as well here's the link.
          https://www.webnovel.com/book/15961321306649805/The-Gadgetist

              Willsimulated
              Ok, Review for that book is posted! Excellent job. Other than what I already included in my review, I just want to say your magic system is really exciting and the line 'Electricity goes through the root of least resistance' added real credibility to the intelligence of your character!

                  ZenoWriter I'm very sorry about my late reply. I will be reading your novel now and attempt to be as wise, perceptive and philosophical in my review as you have with yours.
                  Thank you so much, to have someone take the amount of time as you have for my book has absolutely made this year for me so far. I wish you the best of fortunes with your own work going forward :)

                      ZenoWriter I'm very sorry about my late reply. I will be reading your novel now and attempt to be as wise, perceptive and philosophical in my review as you have with yours.
                      Thank you so much, to have someone take the amount of time as you have for my book has absolutely made this year for me so far. I wish you the best of fortunes with your own work going forward :)

                          ZenoWriter
                          Zeno writer, you are my inspiration. I very much have enjoyed reading your work, and aspire to one day write with similar quality to Emperor NPC.
                          Feel free to come to me for reviews on any of your future works, and I look forward to following any new chapters of Emperor NPC when I get to the current latest :)

                              This isn't mine, but I would like to promote this new hidden gem here. Please give it a try.

                              ー Title: UnOriginal ー

                              Synopsis:

                              "A very...uh, UnOriginal story about teenagers with superpowers. Expect the usual cliches - emo edgelords, bullying (no arrogant young masters, fortunately), high school setting, beautiful heroines (no harem, unfortunately) and teenage drama.

                              And the only CEO in this story would probably be the evil mastermind of a villainous corporation."

                              Click HERE to read.

                              My Review:

                              This is a parody of all the common tropes you could find in each and every unoriginal story. A lot of web novels' readers often demand a powerful main character in the story they're reading. No room for flawed or weak MCs because they project themselves too much onto the characters they are reading and want instant gratification, resulting in a lot of authors caving into giving their readers what they want; le cliché. Mindless clichés. Well, nothing wrong with that. Sometimes people just want to have some mindless fun as entertainment. But it is always fun to mess around and find humor in those common tropes and the people who only want to read those tropes.

                              And this is exactly what this author is doing in this story. It is hilarious. I have only read 6 chapters because those are the only ones available by the time I'm writing this review. But those 6 chapters are enough for me to know that this is some good stuff. Each of those chapters has never failed to make me laugh and bring a big grin to my face, and the writing quality is superb. I really have nothing but praise so far.

                              So, if you want to read the most original unoriginal story about an ordinary, and yet unordinary guy, please give this story a try!

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