Gourmet_DAO Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and to leave such an in-depth review.
True, this story is crazy unconventional. The majority of the culture is made up, but it has its roots in history.
I'm ashamed to admit, but I don't know what stone-stoned feature means.
Also, these first chapters are the setup for a major character arc. The lead is going to have a personality change as she learns the hard way that her actions have consequences.
The majority of the stories are about the journey of a good, humble girl who goes from ordinary to a godlike special being. This story is about how a terrible girl learns what humility means through trials and errors.
I hope, when I'll have more chapters up, you'll give this story another shot and let me know what you think of the developments. I value your insight a lot.
Thank you again for your honest feedback.
(I'm posting this reply to the review as well :P )

      RozaCsergo

      I hope that what you wrote will be so, it would be interesting to see how a personality develops like a young bastard, begins to realize the baseness of his actions, repent and begins a new path of enlightenment, the bright path of Tao!

      I hope you throw me an announcement of how these events begin to happen.

      Thanks!

      beten by stones it is about Iblis, it is a creature of darkness, a fallen angel, so they relate to him.

          Tea_Tae hope you're happy now. :sleeping:

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              jie_chanu According to one chapter it is difficult to judge the whole novel, at least there were chapters 5-6. But I like the idea of your novel, the beautiful title page, and the tags are very exciting. I will include your novel in the library, if there are more than 3-4 chapters in it, I will give my feedback. Thank you, I look forward to updates.

                  Title: A Psychic's Scarlet Dream
                  Genre: Fantasy
                  Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/16000372505632705/A-Psychic's-Scarlet-Dream

                  Synopsis: Those who can do things scientifically impossible are called supernaturals. Among those who know about them, there maybe those who fear them, those who respect them or even those who want to kill them. That however doesn’t matter to the supernatural named Kais as he has and wants no connection with anything that might be related to the world of supernaturals. However, the day he meets a particular brown-haired youth, that would change and he who has tried to run away from the truth for many years will be forced to confront it.

                  If this sounds like something you'll like, give it a try.

                    Title: Copper Lips
                    Yes there is only one chapter up but it's a decent length and gives the concept for the most part I plan to put up a second chapter later today. I'd consider it slightly clique because It's Urban Fantasy Vampires but I'm trying to put up something simple since I'm knew to this site. Also It's gay because I flat out can't write a good female character without her seeming like the horrid YA protagonists.
                    The basic premise is a human sacrifice is given to the vampires every century but the one being given is a Sunwalker (Will be explained further) so one of the sons of the Vampire clan's leader decides to take care of him so nothing bad happens to either the clan or humans. It's not going to be action heavy and is more self indulgent than anything because I love the rare 'Gentle Vampire trope' Hope you'll consider reading it :) The actual summary provides a better explanation.
                    https://www.webnovel.com/book/15992403105613205

                      Just gonna...yeah

                      Title: A Devil's Sins
                      Genre: Fantasy, Action-Adventure, Supernatural, Ecchi
                      Summery: A Devils Sins tells the story of a young nobles daughter who, like all within the walled capital city, has never stepped foot outside the capital. Follow the journey of a noble's daughter, Aisellia Rae, as she is selected on behalf of her family to participate in a charity relief effort led by The Temple administration in its first expedition outside the walls. What starts as a young woman's adventures with high hopes to finally see the world quickly turns to an evening of tragedy, leading to her first encounter with a Devil.

                      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15444394506543105/A-Devil's-Sins

                        If your like Reincarnation, Action, Adventure and Magic then try out my web-novel 'Hero Scout!'

                        I've uploaded two chapters a day so far, and plan to continue that. I have lots of colourful characters, awesome settings and the kind of twists that keep you hooked. Only a few chapters in and you'll read the whole thing for sure!

                        https://www.webnovel.com/book/15971607806674905/Hero-Scout

                        ~Let me know if anyone would like to review-swap :) ~

                          Willsimulated Please read first post carefully.

                          2.If you are requesting a review swap with multiple people at the same time, reply to all of them in ONE POST with your novel link If not, you will be given a warning and your posts will be deleted/reformatted

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                              Title: Emperor NPC
                              Genre: Sci-fi Fantasy/Video Games
                              Synopsis: The Demon Emperor had taken one billion lives and conquered the realms of elves, dwarfs, and giants. When the final realm of man fell to his armies, the stage was set for their world’s finale.
                              A spire of brilliant light pierced the sky, and as the land was torn asunder, the demon emperor met his death. It was not by the hands of a hero, or goddess’ champion, but by a system developer—a creator of the VRMMO Ark World—masquerading as a god!
                              “It’s ironic that it would be you,” said a voice in the black void of the quantum system. “Strange, that you’ve given me this quest, and stranger that I can’t do it without you.”
                              By the power of the thirteenth system developer, the “goddess” Amarytha, the demon emperor was reborn in a new video game where his character never came to be. In the Ark World Sandbox, humans rule as gods over nations of NPCs. Through mastery of their administration commands, they hold absolute control. Only the demon emperor, liberated by the Player System, can challenge them.
                              A crusade begins with one step. Freedom from humanity begins here!

                              https://www.webnovel.com/book/15442526006533005/Emperor-NPC

                              I'm open to review swaps, just message me.

                                hello. i'll drop my novel on Webnovel for the first time here. feel free to look if you're bored. i am reading original and translated stories that catch my attention at my own discretion. thank you!

                                Title: Destined for Talent
                                Genre: Elemental, Magic, Fantasy, Action, Adventure, Drama, Tragedy, War and Military, BL
                                Blurb:
                                Kingdom of Crystal's Soldier Dillon Caudry had just been promoted to General Soldier of the Barrier Unit. Just when events in his life were going great, and he found a beauty he believed to be the love of his life, war struck again and he must return to a world enveloped by pain, fire, and unchanged history. It was the same thing all over again, and he knew he was at the end of his rope. His colleague, General Soldier Aster, trapped in the same net as he and grieving just as badly, never lost hope no matter their circumstances. Will he press Dillon to grow his talent once more, for the sake of their nation? Or do their people face a life of lost courage and defeated hopes?

                                  Willsimulated

                                  Haha so I know I wasn't one of the people you asked directly but I reviewed your story, its really interesting and the suspense that you managed to build up with your writing was especially good. The MC himself seemed a little bit too much like the MC from "That Time I got Reincarnated As A Slime" though. Not just the fact that he was a slime but they had very similar personalities. Another thing I noticed is that when describing the first potential hero you say that he is grinning multiple times, this kind of gives me the feeling that he is sinister rather than actually a good guy. Throughout the first three chapters I kept thinking he was going to turn on the MC at some point. Your writing and grammar are also pretty good but I noticed a few typos and missing words here and there so you might want to do another pass over your already published work.

                                  If you would review my story Id appreciate it as well here's the link.
                                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/15961321306649805/The-Gadgetist

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