RozaCsergo If the tags are correct, and there is no LGBT topics there, then tomorrow or already soon today I will read 10-15 hours later I will write a review, honestly what I think about your work. If such a review suits you, write, if you just want to get 5 stars, write too.

      Gourmet_DAO Hi. I'm very much interested in honest feedback.
      I feel really passionate about this story and would love to know what works and what doesn't.
      It's my first story that is planned out until the end, and the romance is straight all the way.

          RozaCsergo Thank you for the honest answer. I have been writing prose for a long time, but not a writer. I participated in literary contests a couple of times, so I know what questions literary critics ask. They pull apart the story so that only atoms remain. At first, I don’t want to write anything. but then somehow you come to your senses. I’m not easy to write what I think about this.

          I want to note that my English is not very good, I only recently began to write on it, although I taught it at school and university, but used it as conversational and did not write text blocks.

          I hope you can understand what I will write in the review

          with respect

              RozaCsergo English is my third language too :)
              Thank you, now we have 4 o’clock in the morning, I’ll write to you after 12 noon, I’ll go to bed, it’s good that it's Sunday

                  Title: So, Humans Were GODS All Along?
                  Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15948000305490905

                  Synopsis: The couple Anita and Prakash had just completed their lunch and were engaging in small talk when intense pain originated from their hearts and immediately knocked them unconscious. It was evening when they regained consciousness only to discover in horror gigantic man-made objects which were scattered in and around them. It made them despair at the realisation that their bodies had shrunk to such an extent that they could become buddies with butterflies.

                  Their bodies also released a strange smell that was irresistible to the other creatures. It was too late by the time they came to know of this fact as they gazed at the humongous creature that stood before them with saliva dripping out of its mouth, ready to devour them. Helpless, weak, and powerless; the couple struggled to survive against all odds. This is their story of survival where their wits, knowledge, mentality, and familial bonds were all put to test.

                  Also joined WPC #97, you can check it out there.

                  Hello folks, I'm ready for some review swap. If you want a review, just hit me up.
                  Caution note: I don't have a habit of handing out 5 stars just because someone asked me for a review. I'll judge your book based on its pros and cons from a neutral perspective after reading atleast 10-15 chapters. And if you are planning on reviewing my book, atleast read a couple chapters and state your honest opinion, whatever it may be.

                    Here is my novel link:

                    https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/15465781005526105?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=241142573

                    Slow start, no harem (but side encounters possible) , a survival story in an apocalyptic setting. So a mature audience is preferred.

                    One of the main thematics is evolution. But also a mission concept with different worlds like Ultimate Evolution, Terror Infinity or Devil's Cage. The difference is that it is only one component of my story.

                      yaoyueyi YES! A proper review thread ;-; Yeah it was kind of annoying to see so many of those posts and they didn't even generate any outcome. This is more organized.

                        yaoyueyi I would like to suggest one thing though. Why not create separate threads for each WPC? This can help in
                        A. Organized and categorised records of wpc
                        B. Give a fair chance for everyone to promote their novels
                        C. New writers can interact with veterans and learn a thing or two

                        Mixing ongoing WPC novels with general novels can create a hassle for new writers since a lot of times, their links and post may get lost.

                            RozaCsergo In general, I liked your novel, it has a lot of negative emotions, you, as an author, were able to show it very well. But personally, I don’t like certain topics, in particular the mention of the stone-stoned feature. Therefore, I only read up to chapter 5. Different cultures and traditions have different ideas about the world. Overall rating 4.8 stars.

                            If you still get 5 reviews, then you will leave at a formal level in the rating system.

                            respectfully

                                Gourmet_DAO Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and to leave such an in-depth review.
                                True, this story is crazy unconventional. The majority of the culture is made up, but it has its roots in history.
                                I'm ashamed to admit, but I don't know what stone-stoned feature means.
                                Also, these first chapters are the setup for a major character arc. The lead is going to have a personality change as she learns the hard way that her actions have consequences.
                                The majority of the stories are about the journey of a good, humble girl who goes from ordinary to a godlike special being. This story is about how a terrible girl learns what humility means through trials and errors.
                                I hope, when I'll have more chapters up, you'll give this story another shot and let me know what you think of the developments. I value your insight a lot.
                                Thank you again for your honest feedback.
                                (I'm posting this reply to the review as well :P )

                                    RozaCsergo

                                    I hope that what you wrote will be so, it would be interesting to see how a personality develops like a young bastard, begins to realize the baseness of his actions, repent and begins a new path of enlightenment, the bright path of Tao!

                                    I hope you throw me an announcement of how these events begin to happen.

                                    Thanks!

                                    beten by stones it is about Iblis, it is a creature of darkness, a fallen angel, so they relate to him.

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