DragonKnov I just gave you some criticism. If you want to delete it, feel free to do so. Keep in mind what I criticized and work harder. Writing isn't all about having fun, you need to have a base amount of skill and knowledge to be capable of truly crafting a world.

      Hendinklette I already reviewed your novel, but I have say, it is really great. You've paid extra care to keep your English, and grammar, absolutely clean. Your story isn't that original, but your execution of it is great and keeps on getting better. Looking at your upload history, it seems that you upload frequently, which is another plus. Overall, I would say that you have something good going on here, and you should keep on working on it. It's a novel that almost any reader can appreciate.

          Hey, this is my book. I update 8 times a week. Below are the link and the synopsis.

          Poor Man Reborn
          Introducing Dave Unglin, a 42 years old homeless man that has lived a life in poverty. The God Fate crossed him at every turn and kept him from success. now sitting in an alley and about to die from lung cancer he didn't even know he had, Dave prays to anyone that was listening to give him another chance.

          Two gods heard this plea, for they had been watching and waiting. Destiny and Transmigration had been waiting for this moment to snatch up Fate's plaything.

          As Dave gives his last dying breathes, he hopes his next life is better.

          when Dave dies the goddesses take him to a new world and explain his new leveling up system, but when he opens his eye he realizes a horrible fact.

          Dave, now known as Snaggle Tooth, is a poor street urchin with no home.

          Reborn as a poor kid.

          But with his new leveling system Snaggle Tooth would make his way in this new world and maybe work on a new name.

          Born into the digital world of reborn, children terminally I'll are able to live out their lives infinitely. Each lifetime a winner is awarded a single wish, in a constant change environment who will come out on top?

          https://www.webnovel.com/book/poor-man-reborn_18198360906804605

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