DragonKnov I just gave you some criticism. If you want to delete it, feel free to do so. Keep in mind what I criticized and work harder. Writing isn't all about having fun, you need to have a base amount of skill and knowledge to be capable of truly crafting a world.

      Hendinklette I already reviewed your novel, but I have say, it is really great. You've paid extra care to keep your English, and grammar, absolutely clean. Your story isn't that original, but your execution of it is great and keeps on getting better. Looking at your upload history, it seems that you upload frequently, which is another plus. Overall, I would say that you have something good going on here, and you should keep on working on it. It's a novel that almost any reader can appreciate.

          Hey, this is my book. I update 8 times a week. Below are the link and the synopsis.

          Poor Man Reborn
          Introducing Dave Unglin, a 42 years old homeless man that has lived a life in poverty. The God Fate crossed him at every turn and kept him from success. now sitting in an alley and about to die from lung cancer he didn't even know he had, Dave prays to anyone that was listening to give him another chance.

          Two gods heard this plea, for they had been watching and waiting. Destiny and Transmigration had been waiting for this moment to snatch up Fate's plaything.

          As Dave gives his last dying breathes, he hopes his next life is better.

          when Dave dies the goddesses take him to a new world and explain his new leveling up system, but when he opens his eye he realizes a horrible fact.

          Dave, now known as Snaggle Tooth, is a poor street urchin with no home.

          Reborn as a poor kid.

          But with his new leveling system Snaggle Tooth would make his way in this new world and maybe work on a new name.

          Born into the digital world of reborn, children terminally I'll are able to live out their lives infinitely. Each lifetime a winner is awarded a single wish, in a constant change environment who will come out on top?

          https://www.webnovel.com/book/poor-man-reborn_18198360906804605

          http://wbnv.in/a/cc8pCSK

          Title - HEAVENS SLAYER
          The world is in danger due to the continuous attacks of the demons and hellish gods from another dimensions. Will Wang Lei and his generations be able to save this Earth?
          Jonas's world was destroyed. He wants to rule over this world. Will his generations be able to help him in succeeding this goal?
          Find through this novel! It gets better with each chapter. The generation 2 is even better than the first one. Thanks.

            TITLE: THE MAGICAL ORB.

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            The Magical Orb link.

            Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Mystery, Adventure.

            DESCRIPTION:
            An age-old prophecy, a missing magical orb, your weakening powers, his heartbreak - everything is interlinked. Read more to find out how?

            Anaya Mournstride has been living all her life as a human, as it is the only way for her to be safe and survive. Contrary to her belief that she's safe among the humans, she starts having some weird dreams about the future, suggesting the end of all magical races. Will she ignore the dreams to continue her life or will these dreams drag her into a whole new world of thrill and adventure.

            Cassian Deveraux, an Alpha. Not just your regular alpha werewolf but the next in line to the whole werewolf legacy. The only thing stopping him from claiming the throne is- his inability to find a mate. But the orb of matchmaking is missing and there is no way for him to find a mate without the orb. The only way to retrieve the orb is through the last living Mournstride witch/wizard.

            Join Anaya and Cassian on this magical journey to find the ORB, will they succeed in finding the orb? or is the only thing waiting for them is impending doom!
            The Magical Orb link.

            This is also a writing prompt contest entry. So, I request you all to check out my story. Thank you!

            I hope you check out mine and give your honest feedback. Thank you so much.

              TITLE: THE MAGICAL ORB.

              alernatetext
              The Magical Orb link.

              Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Mystery, Adventure.

              DESCRIPTION:
              An age-old prophecy, a missing magical orb, your weakening powers, his heartbreak - everything is interlinked. Read more to find out how?

              Anaya Mournstride has been living all her life as a human, as it is the only way for her to be safe and survive. Contrary to her belief that she's safe among the humans, she starts having some weird dreams about the future, suggesting the end of all magical races. Will she ignore the dreams to continue her life or will these dreams drag her into a whole new world of thrill and adventure.

              Cassian Deveraux, an Alpha. Not just your regular alpha werewolf but the next in line to the whole werewolf legacy. The only thing stopping him from claiming the throne is- his inability to find a mate. But the orb of matchmaking is missing and there is no way for him to find a mate without the orb. The only way to retrieve the orb is through the last living Mournstride witch/wizard.

              Join Anaya and Cassian on this magical journey to find the ORB, will they succeed in finding the orb? or is the only thing waiting for them is impending doom!
              The Magical Orb link.

              This is also a writing prompt contest entry. So, I request you all to check out my story. Thank you!

              I hope you check out mine and give your honest feedback. Thank you so much.

                Zerofuggs If you'd like, you can check my novel Duality.

                The writing starts somewhat rough, but I feel that it has improved a lot in later chapters.

                    Please review my novel still in progress.

                    The Schatten

                    I am not sure how to copy my link but would really like a review.

                      https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/18472471306962105?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4314073499

                      Snyposis-Older generations love telling the story about how The whole land of the fairy kingdom pulsed with Pure unimaginable power. King Sealia was rumored to be the greatest king to ever rule the entire fairy realm.

                      We have old scrolls and statues of what is assumed to be his Queen Ora. The old scrolls record of a great marriage between to kingdoms that eventually caused a war.
                      Queen Ora had a difficult time becoming pregnant. The old scrolls say she went and visited a old wizard.He was able to bless her womb and shortly after she fell pregnant.

                      With out King Sealias knowledge she bargained off a piece of the realm to the wizard. For him to claim as his own territory in exchange for a blessing on her womb. She granted him the very jungle she found him in and deemed the jungle "Royal property"

                      Soon after the King demanded they try for a son and the joy soon turned into desperation for the Queen.
                      The old scrolls do not say what the Queen gave in return for the second blessing but it became obvious she had help from some where.
                      A strong cry came from the new born prince when Ora gave birth to him.

                      That morning after the King awoke to his queen missing and his young daughter. The queen only managed to stay hidden for a few years. Sealia demanded answers.
                      Queen Ora remained silent. Ultimately he sentenced her with treason.
                      No one was really expected the King to execute his wife.

                      Ora's family wanted revenge and felt humiliated. So her family waged a war with Sealia.
                      Ora's mother Ether took over the royal crown and sent out the message that Sealia was slain in a raid.

                      The war created a threatening rift in the realm. Ether Sent anyone that helped against her during the war to parts of the realm where it snowed all year long.
                      Queen Ether was the first to out law certain spells and death curses. Causing a even bigger stir.
                      In between the good and evil lays a enchanted jungle. Myth says is still protected by Queen Ora's magic.

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