Wulin_Jianghu Thank you, really, for your praise. It means a lot to me. And your poems were pretty romantic as well. I had never seen sex written this way, but I loved it!

Sara_Wilcox Thanks ! We do the best we can, as mothers I guess :)

      Sara_Wilcox Actually I'm learning. These days I added your novel and started to read it to learn how. Not sure if I could learn it, but...let's see :D
      And good luck with your novel too!

          Thank you so much for this. I recently wrote my first love scene and it took everything out of me!😂
          I found I had to get descriptive to the point where I was like😳😳😳

          Sex scenes, fight scenes... It's not easy to be an Author.😥

            SpilledInk no problem and happy to help😁 I totally understand. I have quite a few intimate scenes(both kinds), and fight scenes in my first book, so I completely get how 😧😳 it can be before/during/after writing those kinds of scenes. Your worst critic is usually yourself. I wish you luck on your writing! Keep Typing☮️❤️😁

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                  I don't know what is so bad about it. It is usually so poorly done I just skip it.

                  I have learned that according to the authors the female breasts are the best indicators of a woman's feelings.
                  Embarassed they thrust out
                  Excited they point
                  Shocked they quiver
                  Mad they get additional support
                  Happy they giggle
                  Sad they sag
                  Bored they are forgotten
                  Provoked they Undulate

                  So now you have a reason to stare at a girl's chest. You're just trying to understanding of their feelings.

                    I don't know what is so bad about it. It is usually so poorly done I just skip it.

                    I have learned that according to the authors the female breasts are the best indicators of a woman's feelings.
                    Embarassed they thrust out
                    Excited they point
                    Shocked they quiver
                    Mad they get additional support
                    Happy they giggle
                    Sad they sag
                    Bored they are forgotten
                    Provoked they Undulate

                    So now you have a reason to stare at a girl's chest. You're just trying to understanding of their feelings.

                      TianLei
                      For some reason these are what mangas taught you, but being owner of a pair of these, I swear they communicate as much as male ones.

                        I might have a strange opinion about writing sex in books. My husband helps me write and I think it's easier to write sex with another person.

                        You act as one character and they are the other.

                        My issue writing is when do I need a sex scene? When is the sex scene appropriate in the story? As of now, I want to add sex in my book but I keep thinking, it's too soon.

                          Givean_HooH Excellent Suggestion❤️ Thank you for the wonderful opinion!

                          And this is just a personal opinion about your issue:
                          From what I’ve seen on Webnovel; unless the intimacy of the characters’ relationship is pivotal to the story plot, I would bide my time for writing the actual act. Or, you could even tease at it. Start to write it, then another character interrupts them.

                          Interjecting some other types of intimate acts(making out, foreplay, etc..), to build up to the scene is also a good option if you’re not quite sure if you want it yet or not. These of course, are just suggestions. I wish you luck in your writing
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                              After reading 50 Shades of Gray, my opinion on this change. This book has vulgarized everything that is possible and now I do not even want to perceive such novels as art. To read better Emmanuel

                              Givean_HooH If it moves the story along then it’s a good time to add it. I feel like that’s the pivotal part of sex in a story, it’s the next step in a relationship, the necessary component in a ritual, sex is an integral part of who your character is.
                              If you read through a scene and it’s enhanced with sex then put it in. If the scene can exist without sex then don’t add it.
                              For me, at least, it’s part instinct and part story flow.

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