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Fairy766965 you too
Excellent points and polite
Thank you for sharing
Sex In Novels: Helpful Opinions
@Sara_Wilcox hello Sara, I apologise for this sudden burst, but I would like to know your, and anyone else who would like to read's opinion, of course if you don't mind, on the sex scenes I included in this book. I'm thinking about stopping at the second one, and shift the pace to be more action oriented, and focused on the eventual plot, but I would like to know what you think.
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Sara_Wilcox once we have children, we start thinking differently I guess.
Mine are boys, I want them to be warned against this horrible rape culture that still thrives around the world, and learn how sex can be beautiful between people that respect each other.
I guess you can relate :)
d_elfe yes I can I also have a son, but he’s still a toddler. The second he starts having romantic interests, I plan on having a nice, Long discussion about what it means to say ‘I love you’, being a good companion, being safe, what a toxic relationship is, etc.. I want to raise a good man, not a man-child
Your boys are lucky to have you
d_elfe and your book Tristan and Isolde describe the love and sex scene really well!
Thank you to Sara_Wilcox who give a good helpful opinion on how to write sex scenes in a novel. I believe it's pretty hard for some people to write it nicely in respectful and elegants ways instead of being vulgar and porn.
I write my sex scene in a prose metaphoric ways - as I really don't know how to write it in a romantic way :D :D
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Wulin_Jianghu that’s cool; it’s just your style/the way you write your character(s). No writer is the same, and the world is made all the more amazing because of it. This thread is just in case people wanted tips, resources, etc.. I wish you luck on your future endeavors
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Wulin_Jianghu Thank you, really, for your praise. It means a lot to me. And your poems were pretty romantic as well. I had never seen sex written this way, but I loved it!
Sara_Wilcox Thanks ! We do the best we can, as mothers I guess :)
Sara_Wilcox Actually I'm learning. These days I added your novel and started to read it to learn how. Not sure if I could learn it, but...let's see :D
And good luck with your novel too!
Wulin_Jianghu thank you for your support I hope you like my work. I hope to do well in the WSA
Thank you so much for this. I recently wrote my first love scene and it took everything out of me!
I found I had to get descriptive to the point where I was like
Sex scenes, fight scenes... It's not easy to be an Author.
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SpilledInk no problem and happy to help I totally understand. I have quite a few intimate scenes(both kinds), and fight scenes in my first book, so I completely get how 
it can be before/during/after writing those kinds of scenes. Your worst critic is usually yourself. I wish you luck on your writing! Keep Typing
Sara_Wilcox
Thank you
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I don't know what is so bad about it. It is usually so poorly done I just skip it.
I have learned that according to the authors the female breasts are the best indicators of a woman's feelings.
Embarassed they thrust out
Excited they point
Shocked they quiver
Mad they get additional support
Happy they giggle
Sad they sag
Bored they are forgotten
Provoked they Undulate
So now you have a reason to stare at a girl's chest. You're just trying to understanding of their feelings.
I don't know what is so bad about it. It is usually so poorly done I just skip it.
I have learned that according to the authors the female breasts are the best indicators of a woman's feelings.
Embarassed they thrust out
Excited they point
Shocked they quiver
Mad they get additional support
Happy they giggle
Sad they sag
Bored they are forgotten
Provoked they Undulate
So now you have a reason to stare at a girl's chest. You're just trying to understanding of their feelings.
TianLei
Undulating breasts? Now thats new
I had no idea breasts could move like snakes do. I'm pretty sure the author has never seen one in their life 
EternalNightLotus they undulate because they are mirage.