Donniedrako15_
@Sara_Wilcox @SpilledInk @Dark_Scholars @Yulainei @silent_walker
Any of you interested in helping the guy here?
Detailed Review Request Thread!!
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Yoan_Roturier and
Donniedrako15_ I can critique your first three chapters. I am by no means an editor or professional, but I have been avidly reading since I was about five. I’ve been reading romance books since my early teens as well. I’m on a writing break right now, and I need to finish Jo_J’s first, but I can help you out if you can be patient for a day or two
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Sara_Wilcox
Sounds great to me.
You can do mine whenever you want. Prioritize others who need your help, tho. I'll take the last spot in the queue.
Jo_J
@Sara_Wilcox is doing your review. You don't mind if I skip it and jump to another book? I can come back to it later on when you've added Sara's suggestions.
sooo... at least we could give him a few power stones ;)
I am not going to corrupt anyone, but I think that's a nice way for telling 'thank you for your precious time'
I will do the same with yours.
And help with a few votes.
You will get a few votes, so not completely 'empty-handed' (at least from me).
Nice work folks. 
This is community service.
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Jo_J thank you
I really appreciate that I should have yours done by tomorrow, then I’ll do Donniedrako15_ next. I’ll leave comments with the chapter/paragraph number, then delete the comment. It will still show in your notifications, but readers won’t see them. I’ll also come on here with more details/examples if you two don’t mind?
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Yoan_Roturier
I don't mind... But I would like to know how much harsh the author wanted me to be...
Should I look into it as how I view traditional publish book or as general web novel?
I'm asking the author this Donniedrako15_
Thank you. That what I used to do...
Besides... I just discovered (I should read my e-mails regularly) I have an important exam next week so I will do yours asap and I can do 1or 2 more... still I should write a few chaps of my new story.
Thank you. That what I used to do...
Besides... I just discovered (I should read my e-mails regularly) I have an important exam next week so I will do yours asap and I can do 1or 2 more... still I should write a few chaps of my new story.
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Jo_J
Hahaha thanks xD
You really don't have to you know. Aren't doing that for the power stones.
By the way @hansora it's gonna cost you 10 power stones thank you. @SpilledInk since I like to hold a grudge this is gonna cost you 20 power stones. Do ask my secretary @Sara_Wilcox for the bill, thank you.
For the others, I'm offering a special discount of 20% so 8 power stones instead of 10! This is a temporary offer only available until tomorrow!
whisper for those who didn't get it, this is called a joke ;) ;) ;) ;)
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Yoan_Roturier I’ll bust out my Red Ledger! I keep it between my Little Black Book, and my Arch Nemesis List
Jo_J you do it when you got time, hon
Your health(mental and physical), is important, too. Make sure you’re eating/sleeping/etc…(I say hypocritically).
Jo_J
And that is why you're an absolute sweetheart.
Thank you so much for the recommendations, and liking my book. Your book is also lovely. I really enjoyed reading it.
It's a very catchy and relatable story.
Y'all should really try out her story.
Yoan_Roturier
Since I'm all forgiven, bats eyelashes in the cutest way possible...
I want to join the group too! I'm new on discord and completely clueless about what's going on anywhere around there. I don't even know how to get my... uhmm... discord tag?
About the photo credit. There's no space left in my synopsis to give photo credits
I could only manage Book cover not mine
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Sara_Wilcox
Honestly... reading this I was gonna ask how you get the concentration and time to write with a little boy running around.
Children are little angels, but they demand and ruthlessly take ALL your attention. Just looking away for one second, you'd most likely return to see an aweful disaster!
silent_walker How about a general webnovel
Sara_Wilcox No I do not.