https://www.webnovel.com/book/nameless-tale_25279796306697505
an honest review would be nice here.
September 2021- Review Swap here!
Uniasha
Ok pls update after mine is done
Hi guys, here is my story! I'll give you a good feedback if you do for mine as well! I don't read all chapters(I'm sorry you can do the same for mine too!), but if it gets interesting, I'm defenitely reading more!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/let's-make-history!_24758303305755805
send me your link and let's do this 
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@McWms99 Thank you for the phenomenal double review here and there. The moral of the story is simply not to go down the revenge road, hope my readers don't stone me for it when they finally get there LOL. The extra extras are there to make it lengthy, your note was spot on. And no amount of Grammarly which I already use can change the fact that English is not my mother tongue but my fourth language, yikes! Hope it's not a turn-off!
I'll be burning the midnight oil with your book, looking forward to it Thanks again!
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Apologies to the rest of you guys who asked for a review swap, I won't be doing that for a while because I got both of my ongoing novels rated, best of luck to everyone around here <3
Over and out!
MerrySweet That's great MerrySweet, but can you help me out too, I have none 
It'll be great if you help me too.
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@WeAreInsolent it was a great story, It's in my collection now , but I feel like your book cover and synopsis needs work!
daylightmoon123445
No joke I do want to write a synopsis that do not spoil yet I kind find write words. As Cover I have no idea how to find a good one.
Blissful_ChaotiC Hi Kenji, I did yours, can you do mine as well?
WeAreInsolent Let us help each other then! I'll help you with your book cover and synopsis and in return, will you leave me a review?
my discord link: daylightmoon123445#3037
Left a review!
Left a review! Here's mine:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/where-the-world-ends_24022968405310005
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@McWms99
-Something I still struggle with; it looks much fancier when actions precede words or reactions come after them within the same paragraph. Not in two separate ones. Let me show you:
He looked behind him, âSorry,â he said, not really meaning it.
Looks better than:
He looked behind.
âSorry,â he said not really meaning it.
-For someone with grown children, the father doesnât know one wife can sew like a pro and the other is a manipulative being... But then heâs wise enough to carry out the perfect punishment⌠was kind of inconsistency for me, one would know their spouse, right? And another one is when in one chapter the 5th wife is all about âhelp our husband and tell him I helped youâ being selfless, and the next one âShe stole my giftâ only caring about herself, not the husband nor the children.
-The auxiliary chapter before the real one is perfect for your novel; you can provide the vocabulary you invented for your world there with meanings to them. It would also be super cool for you to review your work and add a map of your world within it, which incites intrigue.
If I stopped making sense, itâs because I have a fever and itâs way past logical hours in this part of the globe! Your book is one that Iâll keep on reading. You and your novel are something else. You're amazing. Don't ever quit.
P.S. If you want to attract readersâ attention to your novel, change your cover it does not do it just at all.
MerrySweet I plan on changing the cover and everything. When it comes to the father there's more to it than simply one's great and sewing and the other one isn't. Part of the culture is to be a weaver and a great one at that. Taryu, though he is wise is flawed and let previous issues blind his ability to really see what's going on. Later chapters show that he makes these small but potent mistakes time and time again. Things that from the outside you can say why'd he do that but when being honest you understand we've all made mistakes under pressure. There's also political struggle to everything that's going on that's later explored in further chapters. Most issues and mysteries aren't solve in one day and the book kinda mirrors that. Also I wanted to make a weakpoint in the wise and powerful Taryu, without making him a complete idiot or incompetent. As to Shezira's selfishness I'd like to think your character of Cynthia does something similar no? The anger and bitterness of the situation warping an individual that for all intents and purposes isn't a bad person. I have been working on a map and I actually have a working codex of the vocabulary and words used within the story. This is just one story in a universe I have other stories cooking in the background filled with lore and different tales of other characters. Fall of Benma my other novel on this app takes place in the same universe about 150 years in the future on the mainland continent north of what is called the Malunid (that's the area the islands are located) There's alot and this is something I've really been working on since I was a kid. I'm glad you like the story hopefully you will continue to read and give feedback as I really love your work so it would be greatly received despite the facts that we write 2 completely different genre types.
Grandmasters Sure...let me know when you've done mine. I'll do yours now.