luoshenhua But for my quality is worse :( I need to work on my language and vocabulary. I am writing it to practice. Probably I should first improve my language and then write but I learn more when I am actually writing. Your story is interesting and I read FL wuxia novels from time to time and I hope she won't end up like most of these FL with a magical pet and mysterious husband though haha! About the worlds in my novel the previous world was something like little more advanced Earth and a new world is more like world between Middle Ages and ancient times but the difference of fantasy/wuxia setting.

      luoshenhua
      Hi luoshenhua! I did a review for your book.
      Here's some additional feedback:
      As a fan of cultivation literature, I had no trouble understanding what you meant by the cultivation terms like
      "tribulation clouds", "heart devil", and "outer sect disciple" so I enjoyed the read. I am not sure about new readers?
      Maybe explain why lightening is striking her? If she passes the tribulation, where does she go? If she fails, what happens?
      Yep. In conclusion, for people familiar with the terms, it's definitely a good read!
      Hope this helps!
      Here is the link to my work:
      https://www.webnovel.com/book/12519833905731105

          ArcaneDragon

          I think it's really cool that you're learning as you write! It'll be nice to see how you improve as your story progresses. Also, [spoiler alert kinda] but you won't have to worry about my FL having a romance for a good long while. I read a lot of ML wuxia novels so I'm kinda writing her as an FL with cultivation as the focus. No OP husband solving her problems for her.

            SimmeringHours

            Thanks for your feedback! I might add a glossary then, though tbh I might just copy and paste some of them from a glossary I use haha (I'll credit the site, of course). I left a review for yours, but aside from a few minor spelling and grammar errors, the story itself is really good!

              fantasy_land

              Thanks for your review! I dropped one for your novel, but it's only based on reading the first twelve chapters. Wanted to write the review ASAP so I don't just leave you hanging haha

                Acutelittletrap
                Thanks for your review. I really appreciate it. I think the synopsis can be changed.
                I know that "inconvenient" is softer, but this a "Inconvenient" series of 3 books :)
                I had written these with a concept in mind.

                    KoFu_ I reviewed your story. It's not some kind of blackmail. Story aroused my interest and I hope you will continue writing it. As for reviewing my story do as you wish.

                      fantasy_land Done. Romance fiction isn't my kind of thing but I read some chaps. Only one thing that I couldn't bear with was the length of chapters. 1 chapters = 350/400 words. I prefer reading one long chap than million short haha.

                          ArcaneDragon
                          Indeed the first few chapters are short. But later on I have tried to increase the length. Thanks for the review.

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