Apophis9
There are a few things I like to point out.
1. Grammar: starting chapters has some problems, but it gets better with new chapters. Check out Grammarly add-on.
2.Word choice: there are many places where a better word can be used.
3.Rushed story: it feels like a sitting in a superfast train. Slow it down, describe it in detail.
4.Cliche: some of your plots are used many times in other novels. You need something unique to attract more readers.

      fantasy_land good novel so far.
      early few chapters are really short, you should consider re-writing them.
      try to plan chapters in advance, so you can merge them if they are short.
      also, emotions needs more description.
      develop side characters, i still on't know her grandpa's or his father's name.
      it should be sister rather than short sis before they met, can't be that casual before meeting.(sis-in-law or bro-in-low)
      more quantity require because people will find mistakes or loop hole in writing, if it's short.(like,how his grandpa barged in her office, without prior notice from her secretary. you need to clear up things like that.)

          fantasy_land Just saw your post now. And nah I don't like to force anyone into reviewing. My previous post was only a joke.
          And I only reviewed your novel because I thought it was interesting and...............short.

            MishaK
            The lack of a picture, and the first sentence of your synopsis. really turned me away from reading it.

            A doctor with a bright future, Sneha wants more for her life than a traditional woman. But at the same time her father is keen on marrying her quickly and having a well settled life.

            This could read much better if it was presented like so
            Sneha was a doctor with a bright future, and she wanted to be the best doctor in the world, but her father wanted to marry her away.

            Why? Just so that she can be a kept woman.

            As for your title, "incovenient" is a bit of a soft word, if possible make it stronger.

            Perhaps "The unfortunate wife?"

            Also there is two errors in your first sentence in your synopsis.

            But at the same time, <--- comma the other one is , and {having a well settled life}

            Perhaps you meant giving her a well settled life? I don't really know

                MishaK I wrote a review on your novel. The world setting is in some country like where parents decide about the marriage of children. It's weird for a person from Europe like me. I don't have much time now but when I get some time I will read the rest of your story. I need to prepare some chapters of my own novel. (Being university student sucks sometimes!)

                  Hihi! Reply to this and drop your book if you wanna review swap!

                  This is a xianxia novel with a female mc. There's only 6 chapters at the moment, so it should be pretty quick to get through. It starts off as a pretty standard cultivation novel, but I hope that it's interesting enough that people wanna read more!

                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/12532976806786105/Memories-Blossoming-in-the-Jianghu

                    ArcaneDragon

                    Haha, our stories are kinda similar. Both our characters are a combination of a different mind and body, and they both take on a new name.

                        luoshenhua But for my quality is worse :( I need to work on my language and vocabulary. I am writing it to practice. Probably I should first improve my language and then write but I learn more when I am actually writing. Your story is interesting and I read FL wuxia novels from time to time and I hope she won't end up like most of these FL with a magical pet and mysterious husband though haha! About the worlds in my novel the previous world was something like little more advanced Earth and a new world is more like world between Middle Ages and ancient times but the difference of fantasy/wuxia setting.

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