luoshenhua
Hi luoshenhua! I did a review for your book.
Here's some additional feedback:
As a fan of cultivation literature, I had no trouble understanding what you meant by the cultivation terms like
"tribulation clouds", "heart devil", and "outer sect disciple" so I enjoyed the read. I am not sure about new readers?
Maybe explain why lightening is striking her? If she passes the tribulation, where does she go? If she fails, what happens?
Yep. In conclusion, for people familiar with the terms, it's definitely a good read!
Hope this helps!
Here is the link to my work:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12519833905731105

ArcaneDragon

I think it's really cool that you're learning as you write! It'll be nice to see how you improve as your story progresses. Also, [spoiler alert kinda] but you won't have to worry about my FL having a romance for a good long while. I read a lot of ML wuxia novels so I'm kinda writing her as an FL with cultivation as the focus. No OP husband solving her problems for her.

SimmeringHours

Thanks for your feedback! I might add a glossary then, though tbh I might just copy and paste some of them from a glossary I use haha (I'll credit the site, of course). I left a review for yours, but aside from a few minor spelling and grammar errors, the story itself is really good!

Clouded_Jade welcome yun_yin glad to see you here

luoshenhua
Done
Nice novel, keep going.

fantasy_land

Thanks for your review! I dropped one for your novel, but it's only based on reading the first twelve chapters. Wanted to write the review ASAP so I don't just leave you hanging haha

MishaK
Done

Acutelittletrap
Thanks for your review. I really appreciate it. I think the synopsis can be changed.
I know that "inconvenient" is softer, but this a "Inconvenient" series of 3 books :)
I had written these with a concept in mind.

luoshenhua I have just written my review for it! Loved the beginning!

luoshenhua Thank you:)

ArcaneDragon Review done!

KoFu_ Hello. Wanna review swap?

KoFu_ I reviewed your story. It's not some kind of blackmail. Story aroused my interest and I hope you will continue writing it. As for reviewing my story do as you wish.

SimmeringHours I checked your story and wrote some initial review. I feel that it's gonna be good someday. I am little annoyed by POWER STRIKE but we will see hahaha. If you want to check my story too.

ArcaneDragon
Done
Hope you can get onto mine when you have time
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12186924305054405

MishaK
Done
Hope you can get onto mine when you have time
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12186924305054405

ArcaneDragon
Indeed the first few chapters are short. But later on I have tried to increase the length. Thanks for the review.

Anyone that wants is free to read and review my novel. I'll check daily for new reviews and review your novels afterwards. There are 3 chapters out, so it's a short read so far, but please feel free to give it an honest review, instead of just maxing out stars :)

Novel - Resurgence of the Rogue Blacksmith

Synopsis:

Dazed and with a throbbing heart, Raphael Simon wakes up to find himself given a second chance.

His mistakes, his regrets, the things he never achieved or even thought about trying - all of these are now open to him once again, as he wakes up eleven years younger, at the very beginning of Origo, the VRMMORPG which he immersed himself in for a third of his previous life.

In the depths of a forest filled with vines and undergrowth, near a captivating waterfall is where his story begins anew - the story of Jiver Lefevre.

A Human, a Blacksmith, and a Rogue that threw away his daggers for two sturdy hammers.