fantasy_land

Thanks for your review! I dropped one for your novel, but it's only based on reading the first twelve chapters. Wanted to write the review ASAP so I don't just leave you hanging haha

MishaK
Done

Acutelittletrap
Thanks for your review. I really appreciate it. I think the synopsis can be changed.
I know that "inconvenient" is softer, but this a "Inconvenient" series of 3 books :)
I had written these with a concept in mind.

luoshenhua I have just written my review for it! Loved the beginning!

luoshenhua Thank you:)

SimmeringHours Hi! Do take a look at my book too:)

ArcaneDragon Review done!

KoFu_ Hello. Wanna review swap?

KoFu_ I reviewed your story. It's not some kind of blackmail. Story aroused my interest and I hope you will continue writing it. As for reviewing my story do as you wish.

SimmeringHours I checked your story and wrote some initial review. I feel that it's gonna be good someday. I am little annoyed by POWER STRIKE but we will see hahaha. If you want to check my story too.

MishaK
Done
Hope you can get onto mine when you have time
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12186924305054405

ArcaneDragon
Indeed the first few chapters are short. But later on I have tried to increase the length. Thanks for the review.

Anyone that wants is free to read and review my novel. I'll check daily for new reviews and review your novels afterwards. There are 3 chapters out, so it's a short read so far, but please feel free to give it an honest review, instead of just maxing out stars :)

Novel - Resurgence of the Rogue Blacksmith

Synopsis:

Dazed and with a throbbing heart, Raphael Simon wakes up to find himself given a second chance.

His mistakes, his regrets, the things he never achieved or even thought about trying - all of these are now open to him once again, as he wakes up eleven years younger, at the very beginning of Origo, the VRMMORPG which he immersed himself in for a third of his previous life.

In the depths of a forest filled with vines and undergrowth, near a captivating waterfall is where his story begins anew - the story of Jiver Lefevre.

A Human, a Blacksmith, and a Rogue that threw away his daggers for two sturdy hammers.

MishaK
Hi MishaK!
I left you a review. Here is some other feedback:
First of all, can you change the chapter title?
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 is a little weird.
Also, can you explain the social setting more? Because arranged marriage is a pretty old tradition in most part of the world now.
The writing quality is great! I see a bright future for your work. Hope this helps!
Here is a link to my work: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12519833905731105

ArcaneDragon
Hi ArcaneDragon!
I did a review for you.
I think maybe review / study grammar rules and break long paragraphs apart? (i.e. last paragraph of ch3)
Also render the transition between scene to scene? Like what happened between MC's mother's death and MC becoming a beggar?
The basic setting is flawless. Development is also good. Hope this helps! Keep up the good work!

Hello, i'll follow the wave and be as shameless as the rest.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12563156406920305/The-Universe-is-Innately-Just

Feel free to share your thoughts on my first work, i'm trying to better myself as a writer and storyteller.

Happy New Year!

I joined roughly two weeks ago and I just found out about this thread. I'm not confident about my writing so I'd be grateful for constructive input. Certainly, I'd return the favor (though it might not be that helpful...). So far, there're three chapters out. It's typical (?) modern romance story.

Virtually and Genuinely in Love with You

Synopsis

Verlene is a lurker in an online community for artists. She loves to stalk popular artists for inspiration and drowns herself in a loop of depressing songs when desperate for melancholy sparks. Occasionally, she browses NKD for new songs and live streams.

A small preview of black screen with bolded words in white read: FIRST STREAM caught her attention. The amount of viewers did not even reach 30 when she entered the room.

A certain streamer: "Thank you all for coming! I'm actually quite nervous about this…"

Verlene (ID: Kiku): This voice is so misleading… Let's ask in the comment box! "Uh… boy or girl?!"

A certain streamer: "How rude, Kiku-san! I am a MAN!"

Verlene (ID: Kiku): …Yeah, right. As if.

Many years later:

Hibiki: Am I not manly enough for you?

Verlene: Well… Whenever you sing in high-pitched voice, it can't be helped…

Hibiki: … Fine! Let's take this to the bed!

Verlene: ….!!!!

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Thank you!

SimmeringHours Thank for your advices. I will try to edit this in the future. As my skills improve.There is a option of kidnaping some editor to do work for me in my basement but...