Forsaken1 Your Novel: To all you early, birds, this was not meant to go public.

Haha, It looks funny!

      Clou_d left a review of your novel, it’s very good, just improve a bit on your grammar. Of course I understand if English isn’t your first language (I think I read that somewhere) so I hope you good luck for the future, keep on writing your great novel, Gaius!

        Forsaken1 hhmmm im writing without editing also and i do receive critics with grammar. hehe urs was just starting and with few chapters only. most readers i believe preferred to read with many chapters ahead since they dont like to wait much for new releases.

        just continue as long as u like what ur doing who knows it will lead to something in due time hehe.

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