Forsaken1 Your Novel: To all you early, birds, this was not meant to go public.

Haha, It looks funny!

      Clou_d left a review of your novel, it’s very good, just improve a bit on your grammar. Of course I understand if English isn’t your first language (I think I read that somewhere) so I hope you good luck for the future, keep on writing your great novel, Gaius!

        Forsaken1 hhmmm im writing without editing also and i do receive critics with grammar. hehe urs was just starting and with few chapters only. most readers i believe preferred to read with many chapters ahead since they dont like to wait much for new releases.

        just continue as long as u like what ur doing who knows it will lead to something in due time hehe.

          DragonKnight531 never give up, no one in the world gets their stuff right the first time. Even the authors of the most popular novels on Webnovel needed to practice and prepare a bit before they could become so famous.

          I (and I hope everyone here) use my self-deprecation as incouragment for me to improve myself( Although I don’t improve at all T-T) and I take some time to practice. It isn’t that your novel isn’t good, it’s just that you don’t have much practice yet since you’ve only posted 5 chapters, but with time, confidence(and/or no confidence), and the friends you have all around you, I believe you and everyone here can improved themselves by leaps and bounds.

              Finally! Webnovel is doing a survey on comments and whether or not they should add in a comment overview!
              Everyone, go to inkstone and take the survey so that we don’t have to suffer with flipping through every chapter to respond to fan’s comments. Let’s hope this gets added in quickly!

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