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BaiQiuyue

Author's Name: Vamp_Empress
Request Type: Reviewing
Novel Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12634959205253705/Kiss-With-Mr.-CEO
Number of Current Chapters 25
Release Schedule: 7 per week
Review chapters- The whole novel.

Just looking for some critics to improve my writing.

yu_ba_bu_neng Really. To tell you one thing no one here knows more biology than me because I'm a medical student.

Triggered. You literally called me the lowest sum just for asking for people opinion. How can I not get triggered?

And a woman can only carry one child at a time so men can have multiple wives and he is perfectly normal for engaging in relation with several women while a woman can't even fantasize about it because that automatically turns her into a slut for even engaging in an innocent platonic relation with several men? {Because I stated clearly in my post that I intend it to be a platonic relation}

If you don't see anything wrong with your logic mentioned above then I can't say anything.

That clearly illustrates your mental and educational level.

So I'm not going to waste my time to explain the basic logics of the world to you because it will be futile considering your mind level and explaining such basic knowledge to someone dead in the head might just drop my IQ by some points.

Oneagain Well I'm a medical student so I'll try to explain it.

In human brain the part of the brain that is linked with sexual arousal is closely related with the part that is linked with the feelings of fear, anger, sense of punishment and pain.

In some people---not some-- in a lot of people these brian parts intermingle and thus sexual arousal is linked with pain, fear, punishment etc. Everyone perceives it differently as it greatly depends on genetics. So people tend to like such things as abusive relation and that is why it is quite famous.

Its not like people who enjoy these things want it to happen to them. Its just they like this stuff for a reason that the nature made them that way. And a person who has a different mind structure has difficulty in getting the concept of those people finding abusive relation attractive. So a person who dislikes abusive things can never understand what other people like about it.

So he accuses of such people being messed up or being damaged or sadistic.

But that's not the thing.

Do you know according to wikipedia half of the women had a rape fantasy at some point in their life?

I used to think I'm messed up because I like such things but now I realize this is how nature made us. This is what we are. And we can't change what we like and what we dislike.

fantasy_land Just saw your post now. And nah I don't like to force anyone into reviewing. My previous post was only a joke.
And I only reviewed your novel because I thought it was interesting and...............short.