SimmeringHours thanks!
I also checked out your novel. I think you shouldn't limit your novel to 300 chapters. You made a rough draft for a novel that was good, but you didn't consider development for an idea and your writing skills. It will get better with the more you write.

Novels and Web novels are essentially different. You should aim for at least one million words. It would be better if you could drag one situation into a few chapters.

You mixed everything in the first three chapters because of the competition. But you can split them into different parts. Like 1.Village (you can describe MC' situation) 2. Past (Maybe one of his aunts will tell them bedtime stories and describe the past. This is required because you mentioned deleting previous chapters.) 3. Attack(from giants) 4. Journey(they will leave for a safe place.) 5.Danger, preparation or bravery(MC will send others and prepare to fight with the giant.) 6. Fight.

Ignore the last paragraph if you are not comfortable writing like that, but my advice is you should consider it because most web novels are written like this.

Also, check out 'Book of authors'. That might give you a new perspective on web novels.

P.S. i can't wait for your next chapters.

I will write reviews for others as soon as I can.

    Apophis9
    There are a few things I like to point out.
    1. Grammar: starting chapters has some problems, but it gets better with new chapters. Check out Grammarly add-on.
    2.Word choice: there are many places where a better word can be used.
    3.Rushed story: it feels like a sitting in a superfast train. Slow it down, describe it in detail.
    4.Cliche: some of your plots are used many times in other novels. You need something unique to attract more readers.

        fantasy_land good novel so far.
        early few chapters are really short, you should consider re-writing them.
        try to plan chapters in advance, so you can merge them if they are short.
        also, emotions needs more description.
        develop side characters, i still on't know her grandpa's or his father's name.
        it should be sister rather than short sis before they met, can't be that casual before meeting.(sis-in-law or bro-in-low)
        more quantity require because people will find mistakes or loop hole in writing, if it's short.(like,how his grandpa barged in her office, without prior notice from her secretary. you need to clear up things like that.)

            fantasy_land Just saw your post now. And nah I don't like to force anyone into reviewing. My previous post was only a joke.
            And I only reviewed your novel because I thought it was interesting and...............short.

              MishaK
              The lack of a picture, and the first sentence of your synopsis. really turned me away from reading it.

              A doctor with a bright future, Sneha wants more for her life than a traditional woman. But at the same time her father is keen on marrying her quickly and having a well settled life.

              This could read much better if it was presented like so
              Sneha was a doctor with a bright future, and she wanted to be the best doctor in the world, but her father wanted to marry her away.

              Why? Just so that she can be a kept woman.

              As for your title, "incovenient" is a bit of a soft word, if possible make it stronger.

              Perhaps "The unfortunate wife?"

              Also there is two errors in your first sentence in your synopsis.

              But at the same time, <--- comma the other one is , and {having a well settled life}

              Perhaps you meant giving her a well settled life? I don't really know

                  MishaK I wrote a review on your novel. The world setting is in some country like where parents decide about the marriage of children. It's weird for a person from Europe like me. I don't have much time now but when I get some time I will read the rest of your story. I need to prepare some chapters of my own novel. (Being university student sucks sometimes!)

                    Hihi! Reply to this and drop your book if you wanna review swap!

                    This is a xianxia novel with a female mc. There's only 6 chapters at the moment, so it should be pretty quick to get through. It starts off as a pretty standard cultivation novel, but I hope that it's interesting enough that people wanna read more!

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