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Hi, can I ask a review for 2 novels of mine? Thank you in advance :)

My 1st novel

Author: RanAml
Title: Serendipity Happens
Genre: Modern Romance
Synopsis:

A letter came to her out of the blue:

1st day: 'Hello, Miss. Do you have a name? Or can I call you mine?'

2nd day: 'Excuse me, I seem to have lost my phone number. Can I have yours?'

3rd day: 'Beautiful, do you have any raisins? No? Then, how about a date?'

Who would believe, the famous cold-as-ice President of internet giant Agnolo Holdings is a master at cheesy pick-up lines?!

. . .

Her name is Callaluna. Her parents left her in front of the orphanage when she was just a baby with a promise to take her back. But, they never came.

Until one day, the orphanage she lived in burned to ashes with no one survived. Except for her.

With nowhere to go, she wandered the street by herself trying to find a place she could call home once more. But, again, fate messed her life. She suddenly died in a car accident.

But, is it the end?

No.

For her, it's only the beginning.

And she would have never imagine she would, unexpectedly, find a love so wonderful.

Yes, serendipity really happens to her.

So, let it find you too.

Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/12524568106748305

Thank you so so much in advance :)

My 2nd novel

Author: RanAml
Title: My Sunday Delight
Genre: Modern Romance
Synopsis:

Sunday.

Our protagonist, Estrella Davis hates that day the most.

What's wrong with Sunday, you asked?

Because, it was the day she discovered her best friend since high school has been sleeping with her (now ex) boyfriend. And worst of all, she discovered the adulterer couple on her supposedly 3rd year anniversary!

She was so stupid right? To be played by the two person closest to her for God knows how long!

And what's with this CEO?

Who said he's a warm and refined gentleman?

Poor you all, to have been fooled by him. He's clearly a wolf in a sheep's clothing!

"Pretty boy, I can finance myself. So, only spoil me with your loyalty because I would never share my man!"

"Sweetheart~ My loyalty, my love, everything I own and every inch of my body is for you only. Please, never doubt that."

"I don't need your body!"

"You will soon, sweetheart. You said I'm your man, so you have to take responsibility. You have to marry me."

"........!!!"

Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/12092356605911605

minyol thanks! Your review made my days!!!

Greetings, fellow Authors.

Author: Asphant
Title: Above All
Genre: Cultivation, Tragedy, Romance, (a bit of comedy, both for a dark sense of humor and really deep ones)
Novel Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11937170505631305/Above-All
Sypnosis:

"In a world where strength rules supreme. All beings shall bow before the strong."
This is the golden rule of all mortals who wish to take the path of martial arts or wizardry and defy the will of the heavens.
Those who do not obey this rule will suffer a miserable fate worse than death.

Arthur, a 13-year-old boy who has encountered a strange occurrence during his early childhood, is forced
to undertake the tribulation of the heavens.

4knnife HAHA It's been hard going through the links but I've been loving the stories, anyway.
I don't! I'll probably put one up later or tom and keep you posted haha thanks for the suggestion

Thank you for your kind offer! I'm not sure if you'll accept reading BL, but if not, it's alright!

Author: Xyerose
Title: A Touch of Irony (BL)
Genre: Eastern Fantasy
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12616892505157705/A-Touch-of-Irony-(BL)
Synopsis: The King of Spirits is a spirit that stands above all others, reigning over the Spirit Realm. However, similar to his subjects, he retains no corporeal body. Growing tired of his immortal role, he descends to Earth, and begins to possess human bodies to satiate his everlasting boredom.

With the interest of making a name for himself in the cultivation world by vanquishing the King, Xu Jiyu, a weak yet determined cultivator, sets off on an adventure to defeat the King despite his lack of powerful spiritual roots.

...But the King was not what everyone had expected at all!

King: "Xu Jiyu, why do females and males hold hands?"

Xu Jiyu: "Well, it's to show their love and affection for each other!"

King: seriously clasps Xu Jiyu's hands in his own

Xu Jiyu: "........?!"

minyol
minyol your novel's neat!
Also, add tags to it if you want to make more readers and ask your readers to do the same

I would love it if you could give my novel a read and help me by telling me what you think I should work on.

The name of my novel is Dogs of War.

here's the link Dogs of War

SYNOPSIS:

"Come and find me when you have the strength to kill me. BROTHER" these words resounded in his head.

The scene of death engraved in his memory. The feeling of despair is clinging on to him and the pain attached to his heart.

Three years had passed since then, his country that he protected was no more, the people that he once called family are being hunted and killed.

Betrayed by the ones he used to love, he has no choice but to get stronger to protect the ones he loves and to restore his forgotten country and win a war full of death and gore.

The current upload speed is 1ch/day.

Guys this person is not going to review 47 novels... chill out...

And no one is going to view your novel after you posted here.

4knnife Thanks! How do I add tags, if I may ask? :D

minyol thanks for the kind offer I will also read what you wrote and leave a review.

Author:FallacyPage
Title:Martial Spirit World
Genre:Eastern Fantasy, Romance, Cultivation
Novel link:https://m.webnovel.com/book/12646040105325705

Synopsis:
Wang Xue was known as the Bloody Monarch in his previous life. He was known to slaughter anyone he didn’t like and was even capable of killing an innocent child by a whim.

Because of this, he didn’t have any friend and didn’t have any lover all his life, even prostitutes avoided him for the fear of being killed by him.

So when he was killed no one mourn for him.

He died in the cataclysm that he prepared to kill the people that wanted to kill him together with a Celestial Empire.

With the Wheel of Reincarnation broken no one should’ve been able to get another chance in life, but he did and found its way to the body of Wang Jia.

This is the tale of the one who have fallen from above and had to start over his new life from scratch, will he regain his name as the Bloody Monarch or will he become a hero for the people?

Wow, this thread has so many posts. I think your synopsis is interesting so I've added it to my list to read later. And I'll copy my current project information here, but please don't feel obligated to read it.

Author: gusdefrog
Title: Data Dragon Danika
Genre: Video Games
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11978515106690305/Data-Dragon-Danika
Synopsis: After a great deal of preparation, Danika begins her new digital dragon's life in a very small way.

They say the "Living Jade Empire" creates individualized quests. They say it can read your mind. They say you can find your heart's desire. They say that there's never been a game like it, and they're right but… they're also wrong.

The game is a data mine, built to retell the old tales that humans have been telling each other since language was invented. It doesn't read your mind, but it reads your search history, your favorites, and your blogs. The "Living Jade Empire" is literally crafted from fables, legends, fantasies, and maybe just a bit of stardust.

But in the end, will the game be able to figure out what Danika wants most? Will the desires of other players take priority? Or, will playing it change her, until she desires what it can give her?

A journey is always made up of many small steps, and this game has still only just begun.

minyol I think you need to add tags through a web browser, I haven't seen a way from within the app, but you can add them at the bottom of the novel's front page in a browser?

minyol Please check out my work and give it a review. ≧∇≦

Author: Berriapplepi
Title: The Devil's Sleeping Beauty
Genre: Romance Fiction
Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/12544759506836805

Synopsis: He never know that he would finally fall in love with a woman. The moment he found out that he loves her, he tried everything to win her heart.

She hates him and He loves her.

She was treated as a princess and He was treated like a devil.

She was raped and He was her rapist.

He want to redeem himself in her sight but she wouldn't give him a chance.

When will she finally accept him?
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"Excuse me. I’m from the FBI, the Fine Body Investigators, and I’m going to have to ask you to assume the position."

She raised her fist to punch him on his face but he ended up catching her fist on his palm.

"That's a strong punch you got there." He smirked.

She tried pulling her hand back from him but he wouldn't release her fist. "Let go!"

He pulled her towards him and caught her in his arms. "Darling, please lower down your voice, you don't want our son to wake up, don't you?"

She gritted her teeth, the last thing she ever wanted was to be in the same room as this man.

Seeing the hate in her eyes made him feel like his heart was being ripped apart. He just wanted her to love him. He did everything to make her fall for him but she still won't give in... but that doesn't mean he will give up, right? He will not stop until he will finally have her heart.

minyol
It's no nice of you. I would also try to check your work since I also love to read. Hope you will be able to find time to read mine. x

Author: zyneism
Title: Be Tamed
Genre: Romance Fiction
Novel link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12673713405526005
Synopsis:
Jennie, a girl who lived a simple life with her mother experienced changes she never imagined. Her grandmother passed away, her mom got sick forcing her to quit school and apply for a job. But instead of landing a job she embarrassed herself in front of the interviewer and just when she thought life can't get any meaner, her boyfriend, Riley, suddenly broke up with her and confessed he's been seeing her best friend.
She hit rock bottom, losing all the confidence she built over the years. Will she be fighting all alone? or will someone come into her life to save her?

Would love having the review of an experienced writter, i still feel that my writing is flawed and would love some advice.
Author: SmarthLad

Title: The Universe is Innately Just

Genre: Eastern Fantasy

Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12563156406920305/The-Universe-is-Innately-Just

Synopsis: The Universe doesn't care whether a certain thing is right or wrong, rather it exists in a weird state of equilibrium where everything has its polar opposite. From the singularity that birthed the universe to the celestial objects seen throughout its rapid expansion, every single lifeform, every single object, every single particle, is subjected to this principle.

In the 24th of December 2118, they came.

They came with knowledge, with technologies, and last but not the least, they came with change.

A fleet of unknown origin took upon Earth, with their only goal being the integration of Earth into a bigger world.

The reason? Earth finally reached its maturity. Humanity was no longer a young civilization.

In the middle of all this, Fell Pluck, a young 17 year old, saw this as an opportunity to change his destitute life in the city of New Casablanca.

If it's possible, try to review based on all the chapters, as i already got reviews on the first three chapters.
If not just enjoy the read and share with me some insight!

gusdefrog Ohhh! Will do that later. Thanks so much