VateRise I would truly appreciate honest feedback, I’m always looking for people able to give me advice or criticism. You have my thanks. Amidst the sand

      VateRise Try mine, Duality.

      The beginning is a bit rough, as it's my first time writing. Preferably, I'd ask to begin from Chapter 17 - Defeated as I changed my writing style starting with this one.

      From this chapter onwards is a flashback from the MC's mother POV, so you'll be able to understand it even without reading the previous chapters.

          [unknown] The review is ready. Boy, you have loads of work in front of you. I wish you all the best still.

            Ehmmm my synopsis a bit too long and I only have posted 2 chp and both are some prologue chapter where I tell a bit of back story. I'm planning it do a 3 chp back story before the true action begins ( 1 more chp before the action).
            A chapter of mine is at minimum 1000 word.

            Link->Overturning Fate(~journey in another word~)

            Tell me whether or not I should change anything (including novel name, synopsis, etc, ) thx

              VateRise thank you for your honest review. I will try my best to brush up on my story and the grammar. As for the ak47, that is not a far fetched story. Kids in African countries with war are carrying that gun. They are being taught to use that gun from as young an age as 7

                  IceSnowball review swap with mine?

                  https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14083245205276005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303977620

                  Title : The Arks

                  Synopsis: After the Great Noble War across the galaxies had devastated the planets within, many were left scattered amongst the other stars. As the stars started to converge and planets collapsed, the Solar System was born. The only planet that was habitable for most species, Earth.

                  In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

                      CCmei I reviewed it. It's not really for me, and I found it confusing. I still wish you all the best.

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