You already know my novel, and did a review a long time ago, so I'm not gonna bother. Just wanted to say you are insane, and good luck :D :D :D

    VateRise I would truly appreciate honest feedback, I’m always looking for people able to give me advice or criticism. You have my thanks. Amidst the sand

        VateRise Try mine, Duality.

        The beginning is a bit rough, as it's my first time writing. Preferably, I'd ask to begin from Chapter 17 - Defeated as I changed my writing style starting with this one.

        From this chapter onwards is a flashback from the MC's mother POV, so you'll be able to understand it even without reading the previous chapters.

            [unknown] The review is ready. Boy, you have loads of work in front of you. I wish you all the best still.

              Ehmmm my synopsis a bit too long and I only have posted 2 chp and both are some prologue chapter where I tell a bit of back story. I'm planning it do a 3 chp back story before the true action begins ( 1 more chp before the action).
              A chapter of mine is at minimum 1000 word.

              Link->Overturning Fate(~journey in another word~)

              Tell me whether or not I should change anything (including novel name, synopsis, etc, ) thx

                VateRise thank you for your honest review. I will try my best to brush up on my story and the grammar. As for the ak47, that is not a far fetched story. Kids in African countries with war are carrying that gun. They are being taught to use that gun from as young an age as 7

                    IceSnowball review swap with mine?

                    https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14083245205276005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303977620

                    Title : The Arks

                    Synopsis: After the Great Noble War across the galaxies had devastated the planets within, many were left scattered amongst the other stars. As the stars started to converge and planets collapsed, the Solar System was born. The only planet that was habitable for most species, Earth.

                    In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

                        CCmei I reviewed it. It's not really for me, and I found it confusing. I still wish you all the best.

                            yaoyueyi You are quite an popular author, from what I can see. I made this post for new authors and novels really. I will skip this, as you are doing alright. Just keep at it, and 1M views is yours 😃

                                Dee1 I posted a review for you. Good job so far considering you are a new author. My recommendation is to keep the chapters short, but produce more of them (if you can of course). With time, when you have 80 or chapters, this shouldnt be such an issue anymore. Anyway, all the best

                                    VateRise ah, I'm not really that popular of an author but that's okay! thank you anyways :)

                                        VateRise

                                        Thank you for the review and reading so far! Op you're really going through and reading though the list sincerely :O
                                        I really respect that, since I would find it difficult to do so.

                                        Good luck and happy readings!

                                            yaoyueyi Actually, since you posted, I will review it too. Although you will need to wait a bit. I always want to read as much as I can. So if your novel is good, I will have to read loads of chapters 😃

                                            Didn't really think I will so many links....

                                                IceSnowball You cheated a bit. You are not a newbie author 😃 My initial reaction was "wow this guy's good" but then I checked your profile, and it explained everything. Her Sole Desire. Read it guys, it's quite interesting.

                                                    VateRise oh okay! thank you again!
                                                    usually people always want free stuff so that's probably why :')

                                                        VateRise 😊Thanks for reading.
                                                        😅I guess I'm not a new author. I still have lots to improve.
                                                        Thank you for your review and I'm glad that you found it interesting.

                                                            This is my work as a daoist. If you like xianxia and understand dao, you are welcome to review mine with sincerity.

                                                            Immortality is achieved through the Dao.
                                                            Author: Pathway to Eternity

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