Please critique my work I usually just write short stories and poems this is my 2nd story that I want to make and post online for people to see
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15947684206610305/An-Expansion
It's about peoples view of earth with people having gifts and are expanding their reach through the cosmos an ever expanding world.
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Hoho, the time frame doesn't matter. I'm just crossing my fingers you'll like it haha :P
Are any of you interested in a novel honest review swap? And if you have time, I'd love any critique on my novel too.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15916100706421405/The-Dream-Shifter
I'm a first time writer and my work just got into rank 46 for new orginal novels. I would love any suggestions to improve myself or if you simply want a review swap.
Title: The Dream Shifter
What do you do when you lead a mundane daily life and one day someone comes to kill you?
You who just used to be bullied now has to fight for his life.
Just a simple boy forced to accept new powers hidden inside of him.
To draw his sword and fight.
He must make a choice, to fight and protect those he loves or give up and lose his family.
Yuki must claim what is rightfully his and lead those that follow him
Watch as Yuki changes himself from a timid, weak willed man to the confident domineering that can face the hordes of enemies that stand between him and his rightful throne
Join Yuki in his journey as he fights to protect those he love.
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I would thank you for this initiative.
I have been wanting to have someone share his thoughts on my creation.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/15948783505495305
The Ancient Genes
The story about a weak and coward boy, who meets god and is given a blessing to save humanity. Will he be able to overcome his personality and save the world.
Genres : system, academy, superpowers etc.
Nightmare_weaver I'm happy to do a review swap with you with my story The Day I Met Striker
Willsimulated Thank you so much. I hope my feedback will be valuable for you. Please do the same for me!
Link to my story: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15645697206613905/The-Day-I-Met-Striker
Nightmare_weaver sure view swap let ne read your novel first
IKW Reviewed your work. You dont have many chapters so I was kinda limited
ReincarnatedSaint Interested in a Review swap?
Skipabbeat reviewed your story. You haven't been updating and I feel like if you update regularly then you can get a good following
RozaCsergo I've reviewed your work. I hope you can do mine too. You're a good writer and I hope you continue to write. I wish you luck in your endeavors.
Nightmare_weaver Thank you so much, I just posted my review.
Nightmare_weaver reading your book now. Will review once I'm done.
ReincarnatedSaint your title sounds interesting, I'll check it out.
My book is "So, Humans Were GODS All Along?"
I don't want to fill this thread with masses of replies so here's my link if you're up for a review swap.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15948818406614705/Tangled-Fates
I've been told my story breaks the norms. Would love to hear your thoughts.
Hey everyone! Just joined. I've published quite a bit of work here in the past few hours if you're interested in checking any of them out. Rather than list them all here, I'll just highlight one of them here:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/16016244505666905
Synopsis:
A town with a dark and deadly secret. A cult group, named the Chosen, are using people as sacrifices to an old race of beings only known as the Ancient Ones. Tasked by a government agency to investigate this matter, Eliana Hunt, must sacrifice her friendships and values to take down the Chosen and prevent an ancient relic from destroying the world.
Overlord_Venus Reviewed your work. I like what you've done. Good job
JellyFlayvr I'd be up for a review swap if you could read a few of my chapters and review my work.
Its called The Dream Shifter
Nightmare_weaver I'm reading it right now. I will review your work today.
Nightmare_weaver I've reviewed and added it to my library. I'm looking forward to continuing reading this!
JellyFlayvr Thanks. I reviewed your work too. You should slow down and have a fixed release schedule instead.
